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by JD Clay

 
I like a cuban panatela 
      warm sambuca in a snifter
            with a bean
 
Heady conversation with eurasian chicks
      brazen brunettes
            in the know
 
 
I like salmon almondine
      fishnet stockings and perky nipples
            with a ring
 
 
 
Give me a combo with a cobalt horn
      a stand-up bass and a limo ride home 
            in the rain
 
 
I savor gooseflesh in red satin sheets
      the arc of your back and the curl
            of your toes
 
 
Love me till dawn with a coy vixen smile
      make up my name
            as you go
 
 
I wanna wake up in your sunday smile
      strawberries and cream
            on your lips
 
 
The scent of sex 'neath a leopard skin quilt
       saturday night 

            in your eyes




 


                                       ~jadi

10/17/2004

Posted on 01/12/2005
Copyright © 2026 JD Clay

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/12/05 at 04:28 AM

Suberbamundo! Naughty, but nice. So playfully obvious, and yet subtle at the same time. Well done!!

Posted by Ulyss Rubey on 01/12/05 at 04:31 AM

A titilating tryst tastefully transcribed.

Posted by David R Spellman on 01/13/05 at 03:23 PM

Superbly and tastefully expressed - a delectable treat! Hats off to you on this one JD.

Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 01/13/05 at 06:33 PM

whoa... my kind of poem... blessings...

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 01/14/05 at 04:05 AM

Sounds like your hormones are raging Jadi...Charlie

Posted by Graeme Fielden on 01/16/05 at 10:57 PM

Steamy enough to drive a locomotive! Impeccable form and dazzling imagery...nice!

Posted by Traci Mabats on 01/16/05 at 11:56 PM

fishnet stockings and a limo? What kind of dates do you go on? I am so not that fancy. Give me sweat socks and a rusty pick-up truck. :)

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 01/18/05 at 01:01 PM

ditto to all of the above, saving the sheets. make mine purple and harboring a fox.

Posted by Max Bouillet on 01/20/05 at 01:20 AM

A little black book with all the flavors of a Baskins Robbins. Great words/style/form... come to think of it, great everything.

Posted by Sarah Graves on 01/27/05 at 09:40 PM

I like this, seductive and edgy. Great work once again JD :)

Posted by Glenn Currier on 02/12/05 at 06:17 AM

Well, it's late here in Dallas, after midnight, but you awakened my senses so that I don't think I will be able to go to sleep now... or if I do... maybe my dreams will be a lot juicier. The details and images lead me from the balcony smoke to the bed's lovely stroke. You WOW me, my man.

Posted by H.M Stevens on 02/13/05 at 08:10 AM

Saturday night it is...very nice. love-lorn or something like that.

Posted by Rachelle Howe on 03/25/05 at 05:39 PM

Oooo... Raggy Rikes.... *grin* i don't know why i haven't spent more time in your libary until now. i've read you casually for some time now (as we both know) and i've always been a big fan. anyway. *dives back in*

Posted by Michelle Angelini on 05/14/05 at 10:35 PM

WOW! jadi - I love this - Everything about it. I definitely agree with what's already been said.
~Chelle~

Posted by Mara Meade on 02/12/06 at 04:39 PM

delicious....

Posted by Ashley Lane on 06/22/07 at 04:07 AM

I wanted to say something like this was tastefully erotic or naughtily sublime. But I think I'll stick with my original reaction: Hot Damn!

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