| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/12/05 at 04:28 AM Suberbamundo! Naughty, but nice. So playfully obvious, and yet subtle at the same time. Well done!! |
| Posted by Amy Niggel on 01/12/05 at 04:31 AM Remind me to get a leopard skin quilt! Great read! |
| Posted by Ulyss Rubey on 01/12/05 at 04:31 AM
A titilating tryst tastefully transcribed.
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| Posted by David R Spellman on 01/13/05 at 03:23 PM Superbly and tastefully expressed - a delectable treat! Hats off to you on this one JD. |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 01/13/05 at 06:33 PM whoa... my kind of poem... blessings... |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 01/14/05 at 04:05 AM Sounds like your hormones are raging Jadi...Charlie |
| Posted by Marjorie Anne Reagan on 01/14/05 at 05:02 AM Something about "Give me a combo with a cobalt horn." Makes me say "Meow," Very ummm.....picturesque.;-) |
| Posted by Graeme Fielden on 01/16/05 at 10:57 PM Steamy enough to drive a locomotive! Impeccable form and dazzling imagery...nice! |
| Posted by Traci Mabats on 01/16/05 at 11:56 PM fishnet stockings and a limo? What kind of dates do you go on? I am so not that fancy. Give me sweat socks and a rusty pick-up truck. :) |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 01/18/05 at 01:01 PM ditto to all of the above, saving the sheets. make mine purple and harboring a fox. |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 01/20/05 at 01:20 AM A little black book with all the flavors of a Baskins Robbins. Great words/style/form... come to think of it, great everything. |
| Posted by Sarah Graves on 01/27/05 at 09:40 PM I like this, seductive and edgy. Great work once again JD :) |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 02/12/05 at 06:17 AM Well, it's late here in Dallas, after midnight, but you awakened my senses so that I don't think I will be able to go to sleep now... or if I do... maybe my dreams will be a lot juicier. The details and images lead me from the balcony smoke to the bed's lovely stroke. You WOW me, my man. |
| Posted by H.M Stevens on 02/13/05 at 08:10 AM Saturday night it is...very nice. love-lorn or something like that. |
| Posted by Rachelle Howe on 03/25/05 at 05:39 PM Oooo... Raggy Rikes.... *grin* i don't know why i haven't spent more time in your libary until now. i've read you casually for some time now (as we both know) and i've always been a big fan. anyway. *dives back in* |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 05/14/05 at 10:35 PM WOW! jadi - I love this - Everything about it. I definitely agree with what's already been said.
~Chelle~
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| Posted by Katerina T Nix on 12/02/05 at 01:42 AM wow! This poem is freakin sexy! Great read JD. Going straight to my favourites list :) Kat |
| Posted by David Hill on 02/08/06 at 03:18 AM Very Rod Stewart. Now, I don’t like Rod, but I do like the mood you establish with short stanzas packed with detailed images. I can’t help but see it. I guess I can't really blame Rod.
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| Posted by Mara Meade on 02/12/06 at 04:39 PM delicious.... |
| Posted by Ashley Lane on 06/22/07 at 04:07 AM I wanted to say something like this was tastefully erotic or naughtily sublime. But I think I'll stick with my original reaction: Hot Damn! |
| Posted by Carol Grant on 08/04/10 at 05:10 AM ~~wiggles her eyebrows up and down~~ |
| Posted by Carolyn Coville on 08/12/12 at 07:24 PM Sexy! Love it |
