| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Shonda Chrissonberry on 10/26/04 at 02:58 AM Wow. Can I say that again? Wow. If only it were that simple. To just~insert his name here~ I could think of a few I would place within those brackets. But would those I choose be worth the coveted spot? Maybe I should let him~insert my name here. o:) |
| Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 01/15/05 at 07:12 AM clever! |
| Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 01/26/05 at 02:53 PM So clever. nice job. |
| Posted by Paganini Jones on 03/03/05 at 11:43 PM Oooh - a man who knows how to use brackets on poetry. Superb. I think I am in love! |
| Posted by Maria Terezia Ferencz on 04/21/05 at 01:23 AM I am so loving this...printing it up now to put with my applications for new partners, now I have a standard form romantic poem thanks!! :) |
| Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 09/14/05 at 02:30 PM That's fantastic and it's now in my favourites. |
| Posted by Kate Demeree on 09/11/06 at 01:31 PM Okay... am grinning ear to ear. I rather enjoy the whistful feeling, that is so very playful at the same time. This reminds me very much of how I have felt a time or two. |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 07/16/08 at 06:27 PM Oh gees! I was feeling so good until you missgendered me. Clever and evocative poem, my friend. |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 03/02/09 at 01:23 PM As usual, excellent write (insert your name here)
Very creative and imagnitive. This one really made me smile! |
| Posted by Harold Millican on 04/09/10 at 03:33 AM I love the whole idea , and the way you ran with it :) I'll gladly insert my name! |
| Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 05/18/10 at 12:11 AM charlie, this is a stroke of pure genius! fantastic write sir! |
| Posted by Rula Shin on 05/18/10 at 01:36 AM Wow, this is so lovely Charlie, and so clever! But aside from the clever aspect you really have some very beautiful images. I especially like, "and, the ocean spray reaches a newer
and more nameless hue pounding the shore
searching" and "you (insert your name here) are my zephyr
of love's lotion keeping a coolness
wafting on my warming skin" - really beautiful. |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 05/18/10 at 03:01 AM I must deepen my look into the library of one of my most favorite Pathetic poets (Insert your name here). On the list of Charlie Morgan fans, (Insert MY name here). |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 05/18/10 at 11:14 PM Ha! So very clever and inclusive! Thank you. |
| Posted by Laurie Blum on 05/19/10 at 01:35 PM This is adorable! It is like you wrote it just for me!! :) Thank you. |
| Posted by Joe David on 05/19/10 at 02:29 PM Damn!! this is a thought provoking piece. altho inserting my name along with yours gives me a disturbing feeling. anyway, have you been to zephyr? it is near brownwood, not far from goldthwaite. |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 05/20/10 at 07:16 PM Generic or not, this is a piece of work!!! I like that it DOESN'T talk about how the years are spinning down time for you. Cuz you need to be here. Cuz (insert her name here) needs you to be here. Heh. |
| Posted by Julie Adams on 05/20/10 at 09:17 PM great idea and imagery, a madlibs approach to poetry, gotta love it...kudos on a fine poem, deserving on the top rated list, peace, jewels |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/22/10 at 03:59 PM Nicely written Charlie, and very clever in the use of (insert your name here), and also how you change it to yourself in the last line. Kudos. |
| Posted by Carol Grant on 08/07/10 at 12:22 AM ummm Charlie I guess I am the only one who questioned the last line. and when i find you (insert your name here)
then i'll find me and i can
(Charlie). Am I missing the whole point. I hate when I am not comprehending...lol Is that a new saying I can Charlie..[chuckles] |
| Posted by Mo Couts on 07/02/11 at 03:12 PM How wonderfully clever AND sweet, Charlie! Delightful to read =)! |
| Posted by John Stevens on 07/26/11 at 02:49 AM Love it! |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 05/04/12 at 01:07 AM Guess whose poem's up in the top 10 again? (Insert your name here) |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 06/08/15 at 04:13 PM Miss you Chaz. |
