| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Graeme Fielden on 02/29/04 at 04:32 PM wanting hearts searching for succour, that finally find a home...Nice thought, nicely written :) |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 02/29/04 at 08:06 PM such a lovely thought indeed |
| Posted by Maureen Glaude on 02/29/04 at 08:29 PM he he. I found this in between watching Mr. Destiny on tv, the movie. Your poem is inspiring and romantic, very well done as always |
| Posted by Sarah Graves on 02/29/04 at 11:44 PM Very aspiring JD, the romance everyone is trying to catch. |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 03/01/04 at 12:46 AM Captivated by your poem Jadi. Well done...Charlie |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 03/01/04 at 01:35 AM Hmmm you, as always, give a fresh interpretation to an old theme. But are you trying to say romance (or love) is a fool's paradise? ;) |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 03/01/04 at 01:39 PM 'The fool in me has found a home at last', Well, you are not alone. This applies to all the fools on this earth, naturally. The most beautiful aspect is that you have found a HOME at last. |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 03/01/04 at 11:22 PM Oh Jadi... I wish I could be as eloquent as the other poets who have commented, let alone YOU! All I can do is sit here with a bg ol' happy grin on my face. This just makes me smile all over. "The fool in me has found a home at last." Aww man... squeeze my heart, why doncha? |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 03/07/04 at 12:56 PM nice leaping Jadi and thats no toad, but a prince of a poem. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 03/07/04 at 04:07 PM Wisely short, punchy and highly effective sir. Kudos! |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 03/08/04 at 04:22 PM The fullness and power of a glancing woman captured by a poet and transformed into orchidwords. Beautiful, jadi. |
| Posted by Ginette T Belle on 03/18/04 at 11:41 PM man that rocks...your poems are absolutely capitivating, i love them... |
| Posted by Alex Smyth on 03/20/04 at 02:42 PM Liked the title as much as the poem:o) Great job, it flowed perfectly. |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 03/27/04 at 10:33 PM ::applaudes::... this epitomizes the fluid bonding of the nature with the instinct with the body... incredible little poem... that sinks deep into the soul, and roots there... blessings... |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 05/04/04 at 05:52 PM How the eyes can draw us in and capture us sometimes. Beautifully expressed here JD. Sweet! |
| Posted by Rula Shin on 05/27/06 at 11:04 PM Haha yes yes...the nature is so clever, and so are you. The title is brilliant...yes, we are fools to the inevitable trap, set in the realm beyond our reach. Nice. |
