| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 12/15/03 at 12:58 AM this sounds like a deadly chill...such few words to convey it. Great job. |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 12/15/03 at 01:45 AM How deceptive those leaf stirrings can be when the blizzard comes in full force! Enjoyed the read. |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 12/15/03 at 03:22 AM Cold winds blow. The leaves stir in response... beautiful imagery that captures the spirit of the season. |
| Posted by Agnes Eva on 12/15/03 at 06:37 AM i like the focus on the movement of the leaves, kind of mirroring the turbulent sky above, good haiku. |
| Posted by Ginette T Belle on 12/15/03 at 03:14 PM lovely, refreshing... |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 12/16/03 at 03:15 AM Quite accurate Cathlyn, although up here in Canada, those leaves are already covered by a good coating of snow. Thanks also for your comment on my latest! :o) |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 12/16/03 at 01:58 PM precisely... perfect little haiku... you guys are going to force me to like this poetry form!!!... blessings :) |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 04/21/04 at 03:11 AM Evocative images take me out of the house into the arms of mother nature and her many moods. Well done. |
