Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Ashok Sharda on 12/12/03 at 03:25 PM This is vibrating with beautiful emotions expressed in no uncertain words. If there's some one to care and share ( in the metaphysical sense) the burden of this life, one can close one's eyes and 'start to fly'. You have a beautiful heart, Michele. This earth will really become a beautiful place to dwell upon if there were only people like you. |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 12/12/03 at 05:15 PM Poignantly beautiful expression of friendship and commitment! |
Posted by Thomas K. Hunt on 12/14/03 at 11:28 PM Short and sweet and oh so beautiful.... |
Posted by Cathlyn Cartier on 12/16/03 at 04:20 PM beautiful, filled with hope and caring love of friendship. |
Posted by Max Bouillet on 12/17/03 at 03:51 AM I like the way you look outward to find something inside you. It reveals an interconnectedness that is very important to all of us. Great read. |
Posted by Glenn Currier on 12/18/03 at 05:32 AM I like the Universe-ality of this poem, the way you connect humans with the stars and with each other. Quite lovely, indeed. |
Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 12/24/03 at 12:53 PM your friendship and kindness returns to you manyfold. |
Posted by Alison McKenzie on 01/02/04 at 03:14 PM Adoration, pure and simple, yes, that's how I feel about this poem!!! *HUGS* |
Posted by Karl Waldbauer on 07/29/06 at 07:31 AM Congratulations on POTD! The idea of "close your eyes and you will see it all" is one of my core beliefs. Thanks for expressing it so well. |
Posted by Maria Terezia Ferencz on 07/29/06 at 09:17 AM This makes music in my head when I read it. It is that good. |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 07/29/06 at 01:37 PM Hi Michele. Glad I got to read this again. So true, especially in these troubled times we live in. Congrats on POTD...well deserved! |