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in your heart

by Michele Schottelkorb

when the world seems kind of gray
and all your dreams are chased away
if you're feeling kind of blue
and the world is killing you
 
look up to the starry sky
close your eyes and start to fly
I am there in your heart
I have been here from the start

12/12/2003

Author's Note: for all of those whom i care about... life gets really tough sometimes... it helps when there is someone who cares...

Posted on 12/12/2003
Copyright © 2024 Michele Schottelkorb

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Ashok Sharda on 12/12/03 at 03:25 PM

This is vibrating with beautiful emotions expressed in no uncertain words. If there's some one to care and share ( in the metaphysical sense) the burden of this life, one can close one's eyes and 'start to fly'. You have a beautiful heart, Michele. This earth will really become a beautiful place to dwell upon if there were only people like you.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 12/12/03 at 05:15 PM

Poignantly beautiful expression of friendship and commitment!

Posted by Thomas K. Hunt on 12/14/03 at 11:28 PM

Short and sweet and oh so beautiful....

Posted by Cathlyn Cartier on 12/16/03 at 04:20 PM

beautiful, filled with hope and caring love of friendship.

Posted by Max Bouillet on 12/17/03 at 03:51 AM

I like the way you look outward to find something inside you. It reveals an interconnectedness that is very important to all of us. Great read.

Posted by Glenn Currier on 12/18/03 at 05:32 AM

I like the Universe-ality of this poem, the way you connect humans with the stars and with each other. Quite lovely, indeed.

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 12/24/03 at 12:53 PM

your friendship and kindness returns to you manyfold.

Posted by Alison McKenzie on 01/02/04 at 03:14 PM

Adoration, pure and simple, yes, that's how I feel about this poem!!! *HUGS*

Posted by Karl Waldbauer on 07/29/06 at 07:31 AM

Congratulations on POTD! The idea of "close your eyes and you will see it all" is one of my core beliefs. Thanks for expressing it so well.

Posted by Maria Terezia Ferencz on 07/29/06 at 09:17 AM

This makes music in my head when I read it. It is that good.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 07/29/06 at 01:37 PM

Hi Michele. Glad I got to read this again. So true, especially in these troubled times we live in. Congrats on POTD...well deserved!

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