| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Christina Bruno on 11/17/03 at 04:31 AM sorry what for?? i love it! very clever! |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 11/17/03 at 06:11 AM your imagination runneth away like a breezy evening overlooking an ocean of alcohol... brute honesty with tongue-in-cheek irony, you have absolutely NOTHING to apologize for... write on, dear Max, write on... |
| Posted by Graeme Fielden on 11/17/03 at 10:35 AM *Chuckles*…I'm sure that your grandma used to warn you what would happen if you hung out with the "wrong" crowd…let this be a lesson Max… |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 11/17/03 at 01:44 PM Bwaahhh haahhh hhaaahhhh! I like your muse better! What a marvelous description!!! |
| Posted by Amanda J Cobb on 11/17/03 at 05:53 PM hehe. This amused me much. Well-put together, no wasted words. :) |
| Posted by Laura Doom on 11/17/03 at 08:42 PM I could do with one that throws up poetry of this nature :>] Incubus rules and succubus lures - okko? Very tasteful as always max =P |
| Posted by Rachelle Howe on 11/18/03 at 04:54 PM yeah? well, my muse pimps yours out. and she still owes me for the cab fare from last year, but we won't even remotely bring that up. tell her that if i see her on my corner, well, it just won't be pretty. *grin*
brilliance, max. as always. |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 11/19/03 at 02:50 AM Hahahahaha! Too funny! Now that is uncritical me seeing the absurdity (possibly a bit of selfrevelation in the poem). I will not indulge the critical side of me. This deserves a good uncritical laugh! |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 11/19/03 at 03:28 PM Oh, such a romantic you are. Ha! Especially got a kick out of the Tijuana reference. I wonder if my muse has been way behind in the distance trailing yours and not having nearly as much fun. Raucous good fun, my friend. |
| Posted by Kate Demeree on 11/19/03 at 03:33 PM Oh... Max! I was smiling... and grimmicing at the same time. What a wry whit.. and a bit of bittersweet you place on the page. There are exquisit lines here that could stand by themselves. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 11/20/03 at 02:19 PM Humorous and entertaining analogy fellow bard. Better get a lock for that liquer cabinet. |
| Posted by Siri Lipscomb on 11/20/03 at 11:47 PM You sure give yourself a lot to analyze. Dang, man... ;o) |
| Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 11/21/03 at 05:12 PM My muse just overly calls in sick (one of those types). Very amusing tale and nice contrast to the cliche view of muses ;) |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 11/21/03 at 09:50 PM Such a humorous exposing of you and your muse. A wonderful tale that I enjoyed thoroughly. I'd keep her around too if she continues to provide such as this! |
| Posted by Traci Mabats on 11/22/03 at 02:37 AM Okay, you have cynicism down to an art, quit showing off! Sheesh, you are good. |
| Posted by Leslie Ann Eisenberg on 11/26/03 at 10:57 PM your friend's muse certainly doesn't get YOUR juices going. it is what it is. a fantastic read. |
| Posted by Ginette T Belle on 12/05/03 at 01:03 AM brilliance in the form of a poem, gracing me with it's enormous presence...sometimes i just stand in awe... |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 12/24/03 at 12:12 AM I wonder if that is where my muse has gone.
H-m-m-m-m. (rubbing chin) Fun poem Max |
| Posted by Leslie Ann Eisenberg on 05/18/04 at 09:19 PM this is speaking to me today, max. i just had to visit. |
| Posted by Alex Smyth on 08/27/04 at 12:39 PM Muses, caint live withem, caint shoot em. |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 10/06/04 at 12:33 PM as with all realities and dames, you can't live with em and you can't live without em. but whose complainin? certainly not the bartender? so set em up Joe, got a little story you otta know. I'm drinking my friend to the end of a brief episode. |
| Posted by Kalikala Smith on 02/19/05 at 07:47 PM ahh this is great. i think my muse and yours are twins;) |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 12/10/07 at 07:25 AM How I missed this I'll never quite understand. It's sadly vivid and touching in a very weird way. |
| Posted by Nicole D Gregory on 07/23/08 at 11:44 PM Oh my goodness! I am so glad to have come across this... so clever... so fantastic... Definitely a new fave for me!!! ~N |
