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dollface,
by Andrew S Adamswear the makeup, dollface.
the tears wont smear the black
under your eyes, and the moment
will not tell your secrets.
the only telling signs of any
dangerharmdisease
is the utter lack of imperfection
nothing is flawless,
and everything is incomplete. 10/20/2003 Posted on 10/21/2003
Copyright © 2024 Andrew S Adams
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Cole Miller on 10/21/03 at 04:04 AM yikes, so that was you looking back at me through the mirror... no no im ahead of myself, great piece andrew! |
| Posted by Cole Miller on 11/13/03 at 05:09 AM i know i commented, but im doing the search through your work for images stuff... i think you should submit this one... |
| Posted by Anne Boulender on 03/05/07 at 08:10 AM nice selection for potd. usually i never read them. this here packs a nice little punch and teaches many of us a much needed lesson about brevity stupid girl/neil young style. excellent. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 03/05/07 at 03:22 PM A fine POTD! Congrats! |
| Posted by Kyle Anne Kish on 03/05/07 at 06:57 PM Andrew, I'm always so glad to read the POTD poems. They give me a glimse into writers I may never had read. Brilliant piece of work. Congratulations on your POTD. |
| Posted by Cymbre Dolphay on 03/05/07 at 10:39 PM Biting and true Andy. Rather lovely piece. |
| Posted by JD Clay on 03/06/07 at 02:58 AM Man this is lean, I like this a lot! Your poem has major backbone and the last two are killer lines, Andrew.
Congratulations on your Poem of the Day! |
| Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 03/11/07 at 06:03 PM Effective title with puctuation included, it accentuates the directed personal point in a quite abrupt and conversational way. |
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