| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Adrian Calhoun on 10/08/03 at 05:13 AM Sentimental, sweet, and seductive. Well done. |
| Posted by Graeme Fielden on 10/08/03 at 07:01 PM this spoke to me like a whisper in a breeze ... sentimental, soft and oh so moving ... nice work Kate :) |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 10/09/03 at 08:29 PM I do believe the temperature just rose here! Wow Kate - absolutely splendid!!! |
| Posted by JD Clay on 10/10/03 at 01:52 PM Now there is a mental picture worth a thousand verbs. Each one as sensual as the last. Great piece, Kate. Sweet dreams!
Peace... |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 10/10/03 at 04:30 PM Magnifico! Excellent descriptiveness Kate. |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 10/11/03 at 01:37 PM there is such a wealth of imagery here one could not spend in one lifetime |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 01/14/05 at 04:51 AM Wow! You at your sumptuous best in this one, Kate. Especially like the erotic feel of the shirt moving across the body of the separated lover. It sparked my imagination about this love relationship and the man that left his scent. |
