| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 10/02/03 at 06:07 AM The process of life and the process of death walks hand in hand. Its the journey, in the space of time, which counts.Time is the perfect synonym of life and what you have got is just this moment whichh no one can take away from you. Not even the death. The journey IS LIFE and not the destination. Said so brilliantly. |
| Posted by Jean Mollett on 10/02/03 at 06:07 AM Hi Max,
Whims of God, it's good, lovely. Didn't think about God having whims, maybe so. Yes, it's the journey. |
| Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 10/02/03 at 01:55 PM Love the bunny slippers ;) |
| Posted by Rachelle Howe on 10/02/03 at 03:30 PM "The next morning, I found the whims of God
had carried me to a Wal-Mart in southern New Mexico
with fuzzy bunny slippers dangling from my feet." max... *grins* all you need is coffee, and you're complete. great read.
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| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 10/02/03 at 06:15 PM HAHAHA!!! But maybe they were killer bunnies??? An unexpected jem, Max. Thanks for sharing this. |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 10/02/03 at 06:41 PM you can't get dark enough for me Max. you can express yourself in whatever shade you like and what is a poem that it should not express its darks as well as lights. White would not work as well, but it should be contrasted against a darker background. just me opining. |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 10/02/03 at 08:39 PM BWAH HAH HAH! The exclamation marks make a good point (heh), but you KNOW it was the bunny slippers that did me in. |
| Posted by Christina Bruno on 10/03/03 at 03:13 AM very nice, don't worry. everytime i try to write something nice something negative comes out..oh well lol |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 10/03/03 at 12:26 PM ::shaking head::... you amaze my... LOLOL... this is so wonderful and precious, yet also still carries the substance of your other work... another ace in the hole... blessings :)... (that last line is PERFECT) |
| Posted by Alex Smyth on 10/04/03 at 02:41 AM *chuckle* And you call this one BRIGHT?*chuckle* We need a serious party, my friend! |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 10/04/03 at 03:40 PM Hahahahah...this is so funny and so wise at the same time! Gosh, I love it! |
| Posted by Don Coffman on 10/05/03 at 07:45 AM Exceptional work done here, giving us an image of a dream, a fun adventure, and then a dose of reality at the end that's amusing and leaves nice thoughts. |
| Posted by Graeme Fielden on 10/05/03 at 02:23 PM I'm wondering whether you based this piece a lost proverb from a source such as the dead sea scrolls ... biblical wisdom Max ... sure brought a smile to my face! |
| Posted by Kristine Briese on 10/05/03 at 10:47 PM Woohoo you! |
| Posted by Lori Johnson on 10/06/03 at 05:48 PM You've got enitirely too many friends, I had to scroll forever to get down here & type a comment! LOL
LOVE this poem, bunny slippers is a nice pull from the mystical portion. Good stuff. LOL |
| Posted by Ginette T Belle on 10/07/03 at 03:42 AM *clapping* i love it, i love it...you are amazing...amazing i tell ya... |
