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Firefly

by Ken Harnisch

I watched a firefly in the hedge

The other night, my attention drawn to

The flickering light.

The coal green lantern

Set aflame by some act of mating, in some

Lover’s name.

And though I could not see

The maiden firefly who responded to this

Cry, still, I was fascinated by the light, and I

Watched intently, well into the night, to see

If others would flit on by, to flirt with my

Itinerant firefly

 

None of the maidenwings came, alas.

When the time had finally come to pass

Where weary eyes and blue-prune lips

Had to say goodnight at last.

We moved to part,

Without a kiss to mend our angry hearts

Or ameliorating words of apology:

None drifted up from you or me.

Thus, another silent night did die

And so, I think, did the firefly.

08/22/2003

Posted on 08/25/2003
Copyright © 2024 Ken Harnisch

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 08/25/03 at 04:41 PM

What's Summer without a firefly poem? And a romantic one at that! Thanks for sharing this Ken.

Posted by Melissa Arel on 08/25/03 at 05:28 PM

VERY creative.. :) Excellent rhyming in this piece, Ken. I shall never look @ a firefly the same way again!

Posted by Agnes Eva on 08/25/03 at 06:30 PM

this is sad... i've always admired that writing method, of embodying something outside, in nature, with the atmosphere & emotions of the inside (human nature). it makes it so poignant and really expands the emotion beyond the words.

Posted by Kate Demeree on 08/26/03 at 01:59 PM

Where weary eyes and blue-prune lips Had to say goodnight at last. /Without a kiss to mend our angry hearts/Thus, another silent night did die WOW....

Posted by Christina Bruno on 08/29/03 at 04:22 AM

very nice... :) i have a scar on my wrist from trying to catch fireflies when i was a little kid..i fell hehe

Posted by Don Coffman on 09/02/03 at 12:33 PM

Incredible form here, the internal rhyme scheme is a treat to read that doesn't seem to be used very often. It's beautiful and the ending certainly leaves a pensive tone.

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