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Scented Moustache (Adult)

by JD Clay

 

His mind became

a prison cell,

adorned

with a lascivious grin.

 

 

Picking the lock, he vowed

to never again shave,

and proudly wore

her libertine bouquet.

 

 

 

 

 

~ jadi ~

 

 

 

 

 

07/27/2003

Posted on 08/12/2003
Copyright © 2024 JD Clay

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Anne Engelen on 08/12/03 at 02:55 AM

smiles...not knowing what else to say...surely could picture this with ease ;)

Posted by Mara Meade on 08/12/03 at 12:30 PM

How fun this is to read in a quiet way but oh, the humour and intimacy I see in this picture is....I can't find the word(s) so I'll just say.... pure Jadi! -chuckles-

Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 08/12/03 at 01:31 PM

oh, this is enough to put a smile on my face.

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 08/12/03 at 01:48 PM

you wicked, laviscious lockpicker you. Nice employment if you can get it Jadi.

Posted by Kate Demeree on 08/12/03 at 08:00 PM

Sizzzzzle~

Posted by Max Bouillet on 08/13/03 at 10:40 PM

Lock picking and a refusal to shave. Very ingenious imagery!

Posted by Graeme Fielden on 08/14/03 at 01:40 PM

such vivid subtlety can mess with ones brain you know Jadi...nice one :)

Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 08/14/03 at 02:46 PM

extremely sensual

Posted by David R Spellman on 08/15/03 at 03:17 AM

There's just too much here to be able to comment on. I guess all I can say is.... Sweet! [;0)~

Posted by Sarah Brookes on 08/19/03 at 01:15 PM

*snickers* such an image for so few lines. Dirty boy, Mr. Clay. Wonderful work

Posted by Jack Lanier on 08/19/03 at 05:54 PM

Interesting poem Jadi. You take it wide!!...Jack:)

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 09/09/03 at 10:25 PM

What can I say that hasn't already been said??? Love the open suggestiveness of this Mr. JD. Well done!

Posted by Melina Raven Maness Diebold on 10/03/03 at 05:43 PM

Naughty enough to make me smile. ;)

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 12/17/03 at 09:59 PM

Wide smile over this one Jadi....Charlie

Posted by Glenn Currier on 02/23/04 at 12:52 AM

Funny how a scent can capture you, huh? This kind of "explicitness"... the antithesis of obscenity... and instruction to future Supreme Courts who might visit there. Well done, my friend.

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 05/08/04 at 01:45 AM

Some things can become down right addictive! LOL! This poem is written with great finesse!

Posted by Maria Massarella on 12/19/07 at 12:51 AM

... such lascivous adorn'ations, Maestro! oh how I love the way the imprisoned mind of the first stanza is complemented by the libertine fragrance that summons the senses of the second ... and I imagine you Poet, tracing the ins and outs of infinity in a breath. I'm not going to say this is sensual. It is beyond that. You have this way of seeding poetry that lingers in the imprisoned mind and on breathing your words one becomes the poem. Does that make sense or have my senses been libertined ...? *m.a

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