| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by JD Clay on 07/14/03 at 05:17 AM Now there is a grim fairy tale. Hehehe! Coming from you, I know it is all humor based but Mary is sure to need therapy. Good stuff, pal.
Peace... |
| Posted by Lori Johnson on 07/14/03 at 05:43 PM LOL, funny stuff...a tad sick, but still funny. LOL |
| Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 07/14/03 at 05:57 PM Oh Boo Hoo! This is a darker side of you that we haven't seen Charles! Just Kidding! As usual you bring the unusual to the usual...that little twist that you do so well...and you keep us smiling! |
| Posted by Alex Smyth on 07/14/03 at 11:26 PM And that, dear friends, is why we do not name our farm animals:o) |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 07/15/03 at 07:51 PM LOL!! Poor lamb, poor Mary, poor Larry (who must have overindulged terribly)! Clever take on Mary's little lamb! |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 07/16/03 at 05:44 AM hahaha...too funny indeed. |
| Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 07/16/03 at 06:18 AM Ack! Poor little lamb! It was so young! |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 08/02/03 at 07:20 PM OMG! Dark humor at its best!!! Not surprising I can relate to both Mary and Larry. I take it then that Larry isn't a vegetarian??? ;o) |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 08/04/03 at 06:36 PM I could just see Larry licking his chops while looking over his shoulder at Mary searching for her poor lost lamb! |
| Posted by Kate Demeree on 08/13/03 at 11:36 AM *laughing soooooo hard*..... I am so glad I found this.... I would sure have hated to miss it. What a twist you put on Mary's lamb, WELL DONE~! |
| Posted by Don Coffman on 08/25/03 at 07:20 AM Tsk, poor Mary, but Larry sure did have a nice dinner. Very amusing. ;) |
| Posted by Maureen Glaude on 10/17/03 at 12:21 PM great job. We were just working on this style, a la Billy Collins, in our poetry class recently. It comes easily to you. |
| Posted by Kara Hayostek on 11/09/03 at 11:34 PM Very funny! Love the wickedness of it all, reminds me of dr lecter! Maybe mary's next. |
| Posted by William Teo on 05/20/04 at 08:42 AM lol this is so cool! |
| Posted by Kara Hayostek on 05/20/04 at 05:56 PM congrats on potd :-) |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 05/20/04 at 08:06 PM Good to read this again and see it as POTD. Congrats! |
| Posted by Alex Smyth on 05/20/04 at 11:35 PM HaHa, glad to see it POT'D. Good one, Charlie! |
| Posted by Anne Howe on 06/27/04 at 12:37 PM ..another for the pot, baa .... cute ....good read |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 08/15/05 at 04:13 AM I am trying to decide if this is a vegetarian's manifesto or just Charlie reaching into his napsack and retrieving a wiggling pound of clever. Thanks for a good laugh. |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 12/04/05 at 04:56 PM Witty and palatable! Great read. |
| Posted by William Brunk on 09/17/09 at 08:59 PM clever...like it |
