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Hold Me

by Kate Demeree

Let me lie here beside you
Send the world away
Hold me just hold me
Let me stay
Whisper you love me
Gather me near
Darling we’re so alive here
Molded together
In the night
Holding each other
It feels so right
Bury your hand in my hair
I’ll kiss your lips
Trace your loving face
With finger tips
Tremble together
In each other’s eyes
Breathing our combined sighs
Drinking a promise
Pledging a vow
Holding to a dream
With no knowledge how

Let me lay with you
Tonight

06/21/2003

Posted on 06/22/2003
Copyright © 2024 Kate Demeree

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Vimal Rony on 06/22/03 at 05:53 AM

Very refreshing poem ,Kate.

Posted by Ken Harnisch on 06/22/03 at 07:27 AM

I have to agree with Cass. You have this genre mastered, Kate

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 06/23/03 at 05:29 AM

I like the poem Katie, especially the first four lines. (sigh)......Charlie

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 06/23/03 at 12:16 PM

what arid fool would not drool at such invitation.

Posted by Max Bouillet on 06/23/03 at 04:20 PM

Beautifully crafted with a genuine warmth. Great poem.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 06/24/03 at 03:59 PM

WOW! Romantic poetry taken to a whole new level. Impressive Kate!!

Posted by Glenn Currier on 07/05/03 at 07:57 PM

An invitation only a fool would resist. You make romance sweat and breathe in your inimitable way.

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