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Innocent Summer Fling

by Stephanie Kent

Rain tiptoeing quietly
On a star-enveloped lake
Gently kissing the water's glassy surface
And murmuring sweet-nothings
To the wildflowers sleeping along its edge

06/17/2003

Posted on 06/18/2003
Copyright © 2024 Stephanie Kent

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Lori Johnson on 06/18/03 at 05:42 PM

Excellent imagery, nice flow. :)

Posted by Charles J Hannan on 06/29/03 at 03:24 AM

great piece Stephanie!...what a wonderful feeling this gives.

Posted by JD Clay on 06/29/03 at 07:34 PM

Your effervescent Poem of the Day is a breath of fresh air, come rain or come shine. Congratulations, Stephanie. Peace...

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 06/29/03 at 07:43 PM

A whimsically lovely poetic view of a lake and environs.

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 06/30/03 at 12:15 AM

Nice poem Steph. Congratulations on poem of the day....Charlie

Posted by Vimal Rony on 07/02/03 at 12:48 AM

wow...magical capture..wonderful.

Posted by Glenn Currier on 07/07/03 at 03:38 AM

Gees, how beautiful! I have seen it before but have never seen it till I read your poem.

Posted by Ken Harnisch on 07/07/03 at 12:52 PM

Sweet nothings are sweet somethings in this poem..:)

Posted by Agnes Eva on 08/10/03 at 04:42 PM

oh, i love this- it's such gentle & pleasurable imagery, sweetly metaphoric for your title. hope this places in the poetry contest, it really has a magical touch

Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 08/20/03 at 02:01 PM

beautiful images and a great title.

Posted by David R Spellman on 08/28/03 at 01:48 PM

What a beautiful picture you create with this. Loved the image of rain tiptoeing across the surface and murmuring to the wildflowers. I can see why you won the teen contest with this - Congrats and well done!

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 09/02/03 at 04:53 PM

Short, simple, and yet quite excellent in its expression. One of my favorites in the last teen contest.

Posted by Ginette T Belle on 09/12/03 at 03:44 AM

potent with strong imagery...

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