| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Alex Smyth on 06/11/03 at 09:32 PM The child does the parents proud! Metaphorically well brought up! |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 06/11/03 at 10:22 PM Nice piece. The water associations were well crafted. |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 06/12/03 at 07:22 PM An excellent description of the questioning of purpose in writing and the inability to sometimes put forth what we are trying to say. In this you have poured out those feelings here so well. Congrats to you both on this newborn! |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 06/13/03 at 12:28 AM Excellent collaboration Katie, nice read.....Charlie |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 06/13/03 at 07:47 PM Magnificent from start to finish Kate...and Phil! |
| Posted by JD Clay on 06/16/03 at 03:56 AM Opportunistic poetry, Kate. For nothing to say you've certainly stated your case in fine fashion. Aptly titled too.
Peace... |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 06/16/03 at 05:15 AM What watermusic you two make together! So many images connect with me, the cat, the mockinword (sounding a bit like one of my favorites - Mockingbird), the rain. We have been getting an unusual amount of rain here for June... but I have enjoyed it... Good work, my dears. |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 06/16/03 at 02:15 PM and yet I know you'll find that lasso to bring such mockinwaywords under your spell ( mispelled or not ) |
| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 06/19/03 at 06:24 AM my heartiest to the lucky parents..:) |
| Posted by Agnes Eva on 06/22/03 at 06:53 AM great focus in on the process of wild thought and writing |
| Posted by Charles J Hannan on 06/23/03 at 05:11 AM This is wonderful, Kate...great piece! |
| Posted by Vimal Rony on 06/23/03 at 11:47 PM Fantastic write.Both u have pulled out a magic bunny of a poem from that thinking cap. |
