| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Amber B on 06/11/03 at 02:01 AM Beautiful. *smiles* Took the reader for quite a ride! Thank you also for commenting on my poem. Its nice to hear feedback on artistic attempts. :) |
| Posted by Alastre Zidler on 06/11/03 at 04:52 PM Sensual and intoxicating words. Rich images, sharp in their blurriness (if that makes any sense). Very evocative. |
| Posted by Christopher Shin on 06/11/03 at 05:58 PM Very descriptive. I enjoyed the emotions implied in the details |
| Posted by Jessica Yen on 06/12/03 at 04:50 AM suberb word choice and beautiful imagery. |
| Posted by Agnes Eva on 06/12/03 at 03:40 PM fantastic movement of the breath down the body, very sexy and lush |
| Posted by Graeme Fielden on 06/12/03 at 04:14 PM ditto for all those comments above...a sensual & moving piece of poetry! |
| Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 06/13/03 at 12:49 PM what a beautiful visual. Sensual and graceful. Nice work. |
| Posted by Kate Demeree on 06/13/03 at 02:46 PM UUUUUUuuuuuuuuummmmmmmmmmmm...... for some reason I feel like purring. |
| Posted by Melissa Arel on 06/13/03 at 06:39 PM I agree w/everyone's comments.. this is awesome writing.. perfect word use and aura! |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 06/13/03 at 07:43 PM Evocative to the max Max! :o) |
| Posted by Kalikala Smith on 06/14/03 at 04:57 AM stunningly blurred... does that make any sense? love it |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 09/18/03 at 11:06 AM what a delightful predicament to find someone in. if should happen to all of us. |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 01/06/04 at 06:47 AM breathtaking and sensual... blessings... |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 07/15/04 at 12:42 PM It sounds lazy and delicious. |
