|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Amber B on 06/11/03 at 02:01 AM|
Beautiful. *smiles* Took the reader for quite a ride! Thank you also for commenting on my poem. Its nice to hear feedback on artistic attempts. :)
|Posted by Alastre Zidler on 06/11/03 at 04:52 PM|
Sensual and intoxicating words. Rich images, sharp in their blurriness (if that makes any sense). Very evocative.
|Posted by Christopher Shin on 06/11/03 at 05:58 PM|
Very descriptive. I enjoyed the emotions implied in the details
|Posted by Jessica Yen on 06/12/03 at 04:50 AM|
suberb word choice and beautiful imagery.
|Posted by Agnes Eva on 06/12/03 at 03:40 PM|
fantastic movement of the breath down the body, very sexy and lush
|Posted by Graeme Fielden on 06/12/03 at 04:14 PM|
ditto for all those comments above...a sensual & moving piece of poetry!
|Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 06/13/03 at 12:49 PM|
what a beautiful visual. Sensual and graceful. Nice work.
|Posted by Kate Demeree on 06/13/03 at 02:46 PM|
UUUUUUuuuuuuuuummmmmmmmmmmm...... for some reason I feel like purring.
|Posted by Melissa Arel on 06/13/03 at 06:39 PM|
I agree w/everyone's comments.. this is awesome writing.. perfect word use and aura!
|Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 06/13/03 at 07:43 PM|
Evocative to the max Max! :o)
|Posted by Kalikala Smith on 06/14/03 at 04:57 AM|
stunningly blurred... does that make any sense? love it
|Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 09/18/03 at 11:06 AM|
what a delightful predicament to find someone in. if should happen to all of us.
|Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 01/06/04 at 06:47 AM|
breathtaking and sensual... blessings...
|Posted by Alison McKenzie on 07/15/04 at 12:42 PM|
It sounds lazy and delicious.