| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Agnes Eva on 06/04/03 at 06:13 PM stinging, crystally formed metaphor! |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 06/30/03 at 04:55 PM Excellent twist... painful imagery. Wonderfully crafted. |
| Posted by Jean Mollett on 05/07/04 at 05:04 AM Hi Karl,
Good one, sounds like a love
went bad. So sad. Lots can relate to this one. |
| Posted by Leslie Ann Eisenberg on 07/18/04 at 08:43 PM whoa. searing. |
| Posted by Richard Trotter on 12/28/04 at 08:04 PM excellent imagery, best poem I have read on here for a while :) |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 04/19/06 at 05:53 AM Ouch Karl. Well done...Charlie |
| Posted by Michael Faraday on 05/09/06 at 02:55 PM I can see why you received many comments on this poem! Succinctly said and all that jazz! :) m |
| Posted by Kyle Anne Kish on 05/14/06 at 04:17 PM Karl, I would never have thought to incorporate a hummingbird at a feeder with your bright red heart and draining your heart away. You have incorporated such a melancholy poem in such few words and your imagery is excellent. Wow! |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 07/18/07 at 01:26 PM Quite striking analogy. Others have expressed the full impact of the poem. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 11/25/08 at 03:54 PM Wow! |
| Posted by Traci Mabats on 12/29/09 at 01:10 AM But it was you sucking the life out of me! Bwaaah! I love the jab. Knock out poem! |
| Posted by Cole Miller on 04/04/13 at 02:52 PM woah, that took an unexpected turn! i think the calm energy of the beginning really helped the end hit harder. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 04/04/13 at 03:36 PM Congrats on a fine POTD! |
