| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 05/25/03 at 04:49 AM Another good poem to read Glen. I guess a little time off helps.....Charlie |
| Posted by Jack Lanier on 05/25/03 at 04:50 AM Great one, Glenn. I can feel the mystery of the water as I move along in the boat....Jack :) |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 05/25/03 at 05:52 AM Extremely metaphorical. And a beautiful poem of praise. The awe and the beauty of the WHAT IS is verbalized in no uncertain words.'Oh you liquid goddess
leap into our souls'
The feeling on oneness is so well pronounced.This is a beautiful poem.Your best, I would say. |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 05/25/03 at 10:53 AM yours is a sensitive pen and no myth like that lady in the lake, but we dreamers leap in it nonetheless. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/25/03 at 01:44 PM Beautiful and moving tribute Glenn. What regular or even occasional camper can't benefit from this poetic portrait. Stunning reflection! |
| Posted by JD Clay on 05/25/03 at 11:29 PM You have fashioned a universe of healing and stream of energy that flows straight to the heart with your effervescent verse. Glad you went and pleasured in your return. I have a feeling Lake Whitney will never be the same.
Peace... |
| Posted by Christina Bruno on 05/26/03 at 02:33 AM great scene painted here |
| Posted by Rommel Cruz on 05/26/03 at 06:37 PM i think i should go camping too. =) |
| Posted by Ginette T Belle on 05/26/03 at 11:02 PM beautiful, mystical imagery...quite moving and quite lovely |
| Posted by Jean Mollett on 05/28/03 at 12:53 AM Hi Glenn,
It' lovely, sounds like a beautiful place to go camping. Good one. Jean |
| Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 05/29/03 at 01:01 AM Oh, I love lakes and this really hit home for me! I especially like "We swim in your moon" Lovely poem |
| Posted by Kate Demeree on 05/30/03 at 05:07 PM UUuuummmmm love the warm water feel to this, and the clear crisp mountain stream flavor. Excellent! |
| Posted by Alex Smyth on 06/11/03 at 10:02 PM A beautifully pagan tribute! |
| Posted by Vimal Rony on 06/17/03 at 06:06 AM Oh this is written so beautifully that the real beauty is overshadowed by the beauty of this poem. |
| Posted by Bruce W Niedt on 07/02/05 at 01:56 AM It took your selection for Poet Spotlight to get me to read and appreciate your work. This is a wonderful ode to the lake, with striking imagery.... d:-) |
