| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 05/24/03 at 07:55 PM Good poem Annie. I know he has a sense of humour.
Charlie |
| Posted by Charles J Hannan on 05/24/03 at 11:20 PM Great job, Anne....Your poems just keep getting better and better!!...MUAHS!! |
| Posted by Rommel Cruz on 05/25/03 at 04:28 PM yes i read this on the forum. you get a star for this one. =) |
| Posted by Alex Smyth on 05/25/03 at 09:43 PM Loved the thought on the sense of humor. Maybe it all depends on perspective, hmmm? |
| Posted by JD Clay on 05/26/03 at 03:10 PM Have you ever read a poem that altered time? This one does. Good stuff, kiddo.
Peace... |
| Posted by Christina Bruno on 05/27/03 at 07:08 AM "Have you ever thought that God
just might have a terrible sense of humour?" my best friend always says that it is a monical sense of humor. great poem. i like it :)
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| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 05/27/03 at 02:03 PM Great addition to the "Have you ever..." theme. Quite inclusive and philosophical. Have you ever...imagined writing the perfect poem that everyone thought was so? :) |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 05/28/03 at 06:25 PM Have you ever? This is an impossible question which if starts bothering, can lead one on the path of finding answers. The most difficult thing is to raise questions. impossible questions. |
| Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 05/29/03 at 12:36 AM Definately dreamed a dream like that ;) Kudos for continuing the thread! |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/31/03 at 08:05 PM Of course I have. Excellent poem to remind me to examine my very soul...chilling closure: Have you ever thought that God just might have a terrible sense of humour?
Well…? Have you? Have you ever??
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| Posted by Phil P Robson on 06/03/03 at 01:14 PM I really enjoyed this, very thought provoking. Reminds me of a point in time when you just let all the incidental, trivial matters slide and start to think about what really is important |
| Posted by Kate Demeree on 06/04/03 at 12:33 PM *Roaring Applause*... Wow... Yeah. I'd leave a whitty comment, if I could think of one. I love the open honest feeling of this, so tender, fragile yet strong. lol This probably doesn't make a whole lot of sense, but this is a Really Gripping Poem! |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 06/05/03 at 08:31 PM What a marvelous reminder that it is sometimes those "storms" that bring out the best in us - just gotta get the junk out of the way and find out what's real. And then, along with God, LAUGH at it! Anne, there's a durned good bit o' wisdom in these words! |
| Posted by Rusty C Arquette on 06/07/03 at 02:40 PM Anne, it would seem you're growing in new areas; form being one. I like the way you are stepping further outside yourself, trying different ways of expressing your thoughts and images. Very good! - RCat |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 06/12/03 at 02:59 PM Anne, this is soooo powerful. I like the way you personify the dreams, etc. with "who" in the second lines of the couplets. This piece acts as an examination of conscience... for this reader anyway... Thanks for the help. This wonderful poem is one of my favorites of yours now. |
| Posted by Vimal Rony on 06/17/03 at 06:31 PM Very thought provoking and powerful piece.I liked it oh so much. |
| Posted by Vimal Rony on 07/22/03 at 07:18 PM Just came back to read again.This is lovely. |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 07/23/03 at 12:53 PM yes, I have thought these things and whilst I am a man, still I have given birth to screams and dreams and they are oft interchangeable. provoking work, Anne |
