| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kara Hayostek on 04/12/03 at 03:49 AM ~~~~~~very interesting~~~~~~~~~
interesting~~~~~~~~~~very
very~~~~~~~~interesting
I like it :-) |
| Posted by Sam Roberts on 04/12/03 at 04:23 AM hehe, this is very original
I hate time.....
Nice work
xx |
| Posted by Agnes Eva on 04/12/03 at 07:53 AM cool spacing effects! talk about not your average timespace :P |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 04/12/03 at 06:17 PM Clever, succinct, illustrative ~ catches the spirit of the poem. |
| Posted by Betania Tesch on 04/14/03 at 01:04 AM aren't we playful? |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 04/14/03 at 02:43 AM Catchy grahical poem. Reminds me of a long time observation I shared with a friend the other day, that being time seems to move slower or faster at various times. |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 04/14/03 at 11:29 AM Alas, time is a falcon and not a Dodo. Wonderfully creative peace. |
| Posted by Melissa Arel on 04/24/03 at 04:02 PM Very unique! I like it very much. Good job. |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 04/27/03 at 02:49 AM Boy! that is a flock of time. Fun.....Charlie |
| Posted by Rhyana Fisher on 05/03/03 at 05:29 PM ~~~~~as a river, crossing this thought.
it matches well with your subject.
creative construction.
turned backwards or forwards, it's true(ly) amusing. the ripples flow across the page. |
| Posted by Traci Mabats on 05/23/03 at 02:20 PM Ahh, youre describing my life. I like the little squigglies. They seem to represent the wings time is using to fly away with. |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 10/03/03 at 02:01 PM oft times it can be the actual physical style with which you write that can lend so much more to the poem itself... you have demonstrated that eloquentely here... kudos!... blessings |
