| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Betania Tesch on 03/12/03 at 08:21 PM Temptation is everywhere, but it's a wonderful feeling to know that you can turn away. Currently, it's not the yellow card that's bother me...it's the ice cream bar. |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 03/13/03 at 06:05 AM Love that vision! |
| Posted by Anita Mac on 03/13/03 at 07:00 AM I feel like I was there with you. Well done! |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 03/13/03 at 12:24 PM Glenn, in this quiet environ of words you have captured a serenity to die for. |
| Posted by JD Clay on 03/13/03 at 01:49 PM Charming and delicate verse, Glenn. Perhaps symbolic of how fragile life truly is.
I love the third stanza.
Peace... |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 03/13/03 at 05:30 PM Quite surreal Glenn. :o) |
| Posted by Christina Bruno on 03/14/03 at 12:10 PM beautiful! |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 03/15/03 at 07:05 PM Freedon cannot have a language. As a matter of fact the language is a chain, which binds you to the so called known. The unknown cannot have a language. And yes, I AM is the breath of peace. There's freedom in AMNESS and peace is the byproduct. |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 03/16/03 at 01:49 PM Often strange what feelings/visions come to us in meditation. You capture the mystery of it yet keep the sense of peace and detachment of it well in this calming work. |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 03/17/03 at 05:08 AM Meditation sedation. Good poem Glenn...Charlie |
| Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 05/07/03 at 11:07 AM The flow of this poem feels like someone waking up from a dream... I believe the word surreal was used already but that definately describes it well... good job |
