| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 03/03/03 at 01:04 AM Almost gave me a chill reading it! Wonderfully descriptive. Word pictures of the cold night sky dazzling! Great last line! |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 03/03/03 at 01:05 AM B-r-r-r-r, good poem Dave....Charlie |
| Posted by Kate Demeree on 03/03/03 at 01:14 PM There is a cold beauty to this like the glittering jewls on a blanket of snow. You have written it beautifly! I too long for spring! |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 03/03/03 at 05:10 PM Adds new meaning to the expression "windbag." Love the twist of song title from Killing Me Softly. :o) |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 03/03/03 at 06:13 PM Brrr! I need another cup of coffee after this one... with a little Kalua thrown in for good measure... you really captured the bite of a winter wind.... |
| Posted by Melanie A Bennett on 03/03/03 at 07:58 PM Love the imagery in this poem David. Written very nICEly :) ~Mel~ |
| Posted by Melissa Arel on 03/03/03 at 08:06 PM I can definitely tell we live in the same state! Great read.. :) |
| Posted by Christina Bruno on 03/05/03 at 04:11 AM damn it is freezing, couldn't have said it better myself! |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 03/05/03 at 05:22 AM Man, your poem is so evocative of cold evenings and stary skies when my head more easily pivoted up and around to enter the firmament. Beautiful poem, David. |
| Posted by Lori I Wolfe on 03/06/03 at 03:17 AM Reading this then looking out my window on to the moon lit, snow covered night, makes me feel warm and dreamy from where I am sitting! Awesome poem! |
| Posted by Rhodora M Fitzgerald on 03/11/03 at 03:53 PM "the ease of an express train slicing fog".... great imagery there! Catchy title too. Excellent poem David.... brr my feet are cold now...lol |
| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 03/11/03 at 06:32 PM hmmmm... I wished for the demise of February...but your ambitions towards the coming redemption of spring are far loftier, David..and hopefully your prayer is heard ...for it is sure time! |
| Posted by JD Clay on 03/23/03 at 10:11 PM Brrrr! Great use of adjectives throughout this superbly scripted piece Dave. Sure glad spring has finally sprung. Peace... |
| Posted by Kate Demeree on 05/22/11 at 08:25 PM This is amazing, and your talent no less than I remember in fact greater than! Good to read you again My Friend, I didn't realize how much I had missed this place. |
