| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 01/31/03 at 01:37 AM Fragile things Dave. Nice poem....Charlie |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 01/31/03 at 02:59 PM what sad chaos... each line with its own shard... very well done. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/31/03 at 05:27 PM A very powerful darkness, David. Superbly painted. |
| Posted by Melissa Arel on 01/31/03 at 06:40 PM This poem has a perfect flow to it, David.. A sharp knowing.. I always enjoy your postings. Good read. :) |
| Posted by Kate Demeree on 01/31/03 at 11:23 PM *tears*... this one, I can feel. Well written David.. it touches deep places. |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 02/03/03 at 06:08 PM I didn't know whether to rate this poem as "Well Written" or "Memorable" because they are both. I just read it... in the aftermath of the shuttle disaster... and it works so well to express what happened on the 1st day of February over Dallas and the counties east of here. Thanks David. |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 02/04/03 at 01:56 PM swallows quietly...great read |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 03/05/03 at 01:56 PM How did I miss this one? Vivid symbolism on which to contemplate! A foreboding shattering exposed! Metaphysical in thought. |
