| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by JD Clay on 01/16/03 at 02:07 PM Precious moments engraved into ones mind that offer a wonderful perspective on ourselves. Good stuff Gavin.
Peace... |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 01/16/03 at 02:14 PM LOL!! A reminder of those days when at times as parent one felt the urge to "throw the baby out with the bathwater"! Indeed, a good chuckle. |
| Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 10/04/03 at 06:41 AM haha I liked the ending |
| Posted by Carl Walker on 02/18/04 at 12:02 PM of course we'd never say such a thing, but the absurdity makes it funny. it is filled with affection, thanks for a laugh, good poem |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 07/02/04 at 06:45 PM Been there done that with four. Fun poem...Charlie |
| Posted by Melissa Arel on 07/26/04 at 04:45 AM Thankgoodness my son is done with that stage.. PTL! Very cute :) |
| Posted by Amanda L Marron on 07/26/04 at 11:06 PM lol....i like this....i have a 3 year old brother and a 5 year old sister so i know exactly what you are going through. being that their room was right next to mine. |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 12/23/07 at 08:38 AM Oh so wicked! hahaha! Eden is so adorable. Congratulations on POTD! Bless you and Michelle with your sweet daughter.
~Chelle~ |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 12/23/07 at 03:24 PM The joys of fatherhood...parenthood nicely captured Gavin. A worthy choice for POTD; congrats! |
| Posted by Wendy Sparling on 12/23/07 at 06:16 PM Oh, I remember those nights...long nights...very long nights.. Congrats on your POTD!! |
| Posted by Don Matley on 12/23/07 at 10:05 PM it is amazing how we cannot ignore the sounds of a baby crying.....I think we are programmed for this....enjoyable,,,,thanks....and thank goodness mine are grown up...so peace in Eden until of course geandchildren arrive ! |
| Posted by Maria Massarella on 12/24/07 at 12:19 AM This is so vivid and smilebringing beautiful! A delight! It tugs heart and all, taking me into memories of my own experiences on entering this gorgeous imagery created by your words. Congrats Gavin! Your poem has the fragrance of timelessness ...*hugs* |
| Posted by Laura Doom on 12/24/07 at 12:51 AM Ha! Now the laughter has subsided, I have to get back to my mother on this one :> |
| Posted by Joe Cramer on 12/25/07 at 02:13 AM Congrats on POTD... an excellent choice! |
