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Inferno

by Anne Engelen

You and I

A perfect match

Sizzling souls on fire

 

Flames of desire

Oxygen fed

Always reaching higher

 

Short of breath

Drowning in this infernal sea

Forgetting to respire

01/01/2003

Posted on 01/01/2003
Copyright © 2024 Anne Engelen

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/01/03 at 03:25 PM

WOW! Adds new meaning to 'breathless.' Reminds me of someone I know too. Thanks Anne.

Posted by Rusty C Arquette on 01/02/03 at 12:56 AM

The promise of passion in the new year - To a warm and secure tomorrow - Rcat

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 01/02/03 at 05:36 AM

A great love can take your breath away. Another good poem Anne....Charlie

Posted by Glenn Currier on 01/02/03 at 06:03 AM

Yep... it's important to remember to breathe... especially when the inferno is trying to use up all the oxygen... obviously you did "inspire" with this poem. Well written, Anne. Glad to read your work and to begin the new year with these creative fireworks from you.

Posted by Charles J Hannan on 01/02/03 at 01:04 PM

This one is great, Anne.....you inspire me...MUAHS!!

Posted by Christina Bruno on 01/02/03 at 11:44 PM

sizzling hot!

Posted by Vimal Rony on 01/04/03 at 07:27 PM

A rare cameo.WONDERFUL Anne.

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 01/05/03 at 02:15 PM

short and powerful strokes of the philosophic brush put upon a kindred canvas.

Posted by JD Clay on 01/05/03 at 09:23 PM

A very consuming poem Anne. Fan the flames. Peace...

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