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Four Times Daily

by Anne Engelen

The perfect cure for when I’m blue

is a dose of you

 

Then you said:

I’m your med just take me four times daily

 

I thought a while then had to smile

It sure beats popping pills

How to take this med you’ve never said

so I wondered still

 

You then explained:

Just like a pill

Melt it on your tongue

When that’s done

You swallow through

And drink a glass of water

 

Preferably

Take it orally

But most importantly

 

Four times daily

12/10/2002

Posted on 12/10/2002
Copyright © 2024 Anne Engelen

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Christina Bruno on 12/11/02 at 06:44 AM

this is so cute i love it

Posted by Charles J Hannan on 12/11/02 at 09:51 AM

All I have to say is: WOOOOOOOOHOOOOOOOOOO!!....;) Great poem, Anne!!...MUAHS!!

Posted by David R Spellman on 12/11/02 at 03:18 PM

Great flow to this and a cute, evocative message. Nicely done!

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 12/11/02 at 05:28 PM

*big grin* Anne. Your poem helped to brighten my middle of the work week. Tx!

Posted by Mara Meade on 12/11/02 at 08:06 PM

Hee hee! Yep, I'd like to find me one o' them pills....

Posted by Rommel Cruz on 12/12/02 at 08:09 AM

ehem, my mind just went down the gutter. lol

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 01/02/03 at 05:41 AM

I dare not comment. Whew it sure is warm in here. ......Charlie

Posted by Melissa Arel on 01/14/03 at 11:24 PM

I can't help but laugh at everyone's comments - how can I beat these?? LoL.. this was extremely clever, and well said!

Posted by Kate Donovan on 01/31/03 at 05:45 PM

i love this, it made me laugh. wonderful rhyme, even better message ;o)

Posted by Glenn Currier on 03/05/03 at 04:23 AM

Oh you minstrel... masterfully stringing us along on this delicious chronology!

Posted by Alex Smyth on 05/31/03 at 09:08 PM

LOL! What a generous artist! You enticingly set the stage to invite creative comments! This has made my day!

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