| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kristine Briese on 12/10/02 at 03:53 PM *cackle* |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 12/10/02 at 05:52 PM hehe...scratching my own head over this one David. Quick someone! dial 9-1-1!!! |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 12/10/02 at 11:06 PM Belly laughs!!!!! |
| Posted by Anne Howe on 12/11/02 at 03:41 AM *smiles* and shaking of head ...... clever! |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 12/11/02 at 04:05 AM LOL!! Sounds like a nightmare! Hope so anyway! Clever! |
| Posted by JD Clay on 12/12/02 at 05:27 AM Good imagery Sir David. Peace... |
| Posted by Rommel Cruz on 12/12/02 at 01:13 PM lol. at least you still have your hair to be raised. |
| Posted by Christina Bruno on 12/13/02 at 04:55 AM hehehe adorable |
| Posted by Kate Demeree on 12/13/02 at 05:04 AM *laughing sooooo hard* I like it! |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 12/14/02 at 05:58 PM this frocks it's lick. rib tickling metaphors. |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 12/15/02 at 02:00 PM I wish I could have rated your "Overall" as both Clever AND Well Written... well... I do so here. Good laugh to begin a long but exciting day for my family... I love it David... good example and model for my newly found fascination with Senryus. |
| Posted by Gabrielle L Gervais on 12/19/02 at 04:04 AM i hope i look like that when i wake up tomorrow morning. cross your fingers for me ;) |
| Posted by John Harder on 12/20/02 at 06:49 AM something normal turned interesting. |
| Posted by Alex Smyth on 07/12/03 at 01:48 AM Yep, that's pretty much it in a nutshell, lol! |
