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Bed Head (senryu)

by David R Spellman

some crazed steamroller
attacked in the night; left flat,
hair-raising ruins


Posted on 12/10/2002
Copyright © 2024 David R Spellman

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kristine Briese on 12/10/02 at 03:53 PM


Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 12/10/02 at 05:52 PM

hehe...scratching my own head over this one David. Quick someone! dial 9-1-1!!!

Posted by Mara Meade on 12/10/02 at 11:06 PM

Belly laughs!!!!!

Posted by Anne Howe on 12/11/02 at 03:41 AM

*smiles* and shaking of head ...... clever!

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 12/11/02 at 04:05 AM

LOL!! Sounds like a nightmare! Hope so anyway! Clever!

Posted by JD Clay on 12/12/02 at 05:27 AM

Good imagery Sir David. Peace...

Posted by Rommel Cruz on 12/12/02 at 01:13 PM

lol. at least you still have your hair to be raised.

Posted by Christina Bruno on 12/13/02 at 04:55 AM

hehehe adorable

Posted by Kate Demeree on 12/13/02 at 05:04 AM

*laughing sooooo hard* I like it!

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 12/14/02 at 05:58 PM

this frocks it's lick. rib tickling metaphors.

Posted by Glenn Currier on 12/15/02 at 02:00 PM

I wish I could have rated your "Overall" as both Clever AND Well Written... well... I do so here. Good laugh to begin a long but exciting day for my family... I love it David... good example and model for my newly found fascination with Senryus.

Posted by Gabrielle L Gervais on 12/19/02 at 04:04 AM

i hope i look like that when i wake up tomorrow morning. cross your fingers for me ;)

Posted by John Harder on 12/20/02 at 06:49 AM

something normal turned interesting.

Posted by Alex Smyth on 07/12/03 at 01:48 AM

Yep, that's pretty much it in a nutshell, lol!

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