| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Christina Bruno on 12/09/02 at 04:57 PM Very pretty poem |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 12/09/02 at 06:09 PM I've always loved the idea of, although far apart, sharing the same sky... this is a gentle moon-song to your beloved... |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 01/02/03 at 05:54 AM The love expressed here is a yearning to kiss the moon and enter its mysterious light. Lovely poem. |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 01/05/03 at 12:12 PM such words to sate and soothe the thirsty souls in which to lave and wade for an eternity. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/09/03 at 02:11 PM Wow! Really like the idea of being each other's moon. I see I'm not the only romantic here. Good one Vimal! |
| Posted by Ginette T Belle on 01/14/03 at 04:06 AM languid and flowing poem...I also love that phrase "blushing red moon", beautifully put |
| Posted by Kate Donovan on 01/31/03 at 06:02 PM awww, i know exactly how you feel, my love is in another country as well. stay strong. |
| Posted by Kara Hayostek on 04/17/03 at 05:58 AM You are the sweetest man, when your love is in another country and you still feel such romantic and passionate feelings for her. I love your writing, all of it...it is so nice to read about real true and inspiring love. |
| Posted by JD Clay on 05/15/03 at 02:41 AM I love moon poems, especially when they involve soulmates. Good stuff, Vimal.
Peace... |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 07/01/03 at 11:19 AM revisiting this piece and finding it as fresh and luminant as the first, Vimal. |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 07/23/03 at 07:18 PM Very romantic. Expression of devotion and selfcontrol. Very good message for abstinence in an intimate unmarried relationship implied (that is unusual but GREAT!) |
| Posted by Jean Mollett on 07/27/03 at 04:41 AM Hi Vimal,
Very good, beautiful. Is your love in the war? There's lots of praying for our troops to come home safely. I also agree with Quentin Clingerman. Jean |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 08/04/03 at 06:13 PM Very beautiful and touching expression of a deep felt love. Anyone who has ever felt such as this would envy the way you have expressed it. |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 08/20/03 at 06:34 PM Lovers clothed in the clouds and passion under the night sky. Beautifully written with a wonderful use of words. |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 02/04/05 at 12:45 AM Good reading Vimal...Charlie |
