Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Christina Bruno on 12/09/02 at 04:58 PM making love seem almost positive oncemore |
Posted by Mara Meade on 12/09/02 at 05:24 PM you have a romantic heart, Vimal... beautiful... |
Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 01/05/03 at 12:28 PM words replete with such emotions as to enrapture any heart |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/09/03 at 03:18 AM Truly eloquent, Vimal. :o) |
Posted by Glenn Currier on 02/08/03 at 02:26 PM "cocooning our souls"... what a lovely image... you stretch the fabric of your love across the seas to this Texas (U.S.) town where it is much needed. I like the way this poem expresses the spirituality and the possibilities in both a personal and a relational journey. Good work, Vimal. |
Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 05/07/03 at 02:58 PM So dreamy and sentimental... I like the last line especially "Sketch our dreams together forever". Shows a bond between the two... sharing and blending their dreams. Great job |
Posted by Max Bouillet on 08/10/03 at 07:45 AM Beautiful and spiritual. A wonderful visual for the travels we make in this life and the next. Thanks for sharing! |
Posted by Karen Michelle on 08/11/03 at 08:11 AM such a beautiful metamorphosis. |
Posted by Jean Mollett on 08/16/03 at 03:28 AM Hi Vimal,
Good one. Beautiful. Jean |
Posted by Patricia J Reed on 08/21/03 at 10:42 PM very nice vimal- i especially like the second stanza
-patti |