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Just a Thought (Soulful)

by Vimal Rony

Your body and mine
carries us through
this journey
cocooning our souls

until
we are released to
fly like butterflies in arms
to another world were
roses won't bleed us

Until then
In this world we know
let us stretch the fabric of love
and sketch our dreams together
forever.

12/08/2002

Posted on 12/08/2002
Copyright © 2024 Vimal Rony

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Christina Bruno on 12/09/02 at 04:58 PM

making love seem almost positive oncemore

Posted by Mara Meade on 12/09/02 at 05:24 PM

you have a romantic heart, Vimal... beautiful...

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 01/05/03 at 12:28 PM

words replete with such emotions as to enrapture any heart

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/09/03 at 03:18 AM

Truly eloquent, Vimal. :o)

Posted by Glenn Currier on 02/08/03 at 02:26 PM

"cocooning our souls"... what a lovely image... you stretch the fabric of your love across the seas to this Texas (U.S.) town where it is much needed. I like the way this poem expresses the spirituality and the possibilities in both a personal and a relational journey. Good work, Vimal.

Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 05/07/03 at 02:58 PM

So dreamy and sentimental... I like the last line especially "Sketch our dreams together forever". Shows a bond between the two... sharing and blending their dreams. Great job

Posted by Max Bouillet on 08/10/03 at 07:45 AM

Beautiful and spiritual. A wonderful visual for the travels we make in this life and the next. Thanks for sharing!

Posted by Karen Michelle on 08/11/03 at 08:11 AM

such a beautiful metamorphosis.

Posted by Jean Mollett on 08/16/03 at 03:28 AM

Hi Vimal, Good one. Beautiful. Jean

Posted by Patricia J Reed on 08/21/03 at 10:42 PM

very nice vimal- i especially like the second stanza -patti

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