| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kristine Briese on 12/02/02 at 10:23 PM Can I climb into your head and look around? I need a new perspective. |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 12/02/02 at 11:45 PM a wonderful twisted brain you have there!! |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 12/03/02 at 01:30 AM Why not? Now I wonder what he hears? Your "take off" on "holding a shell to the ear to hear the sea" is quite creative! |
| Posted by Christina Bruno on 12/03/02 at 02:47 AM Very intresting... |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 12/03/02 at 02:44 PM First take: funny! Second take: have you read Rumi? Or Idries Shah? You hit pretty close with this one...! MARVELOUS, dahlink! |
| Posted by Richard D Frederick on 12/04/02 at 01:04 AM amazing. outstanding...
just...well-done.
i always was a fan of the hard-hitting simplicity of those one-line poems that are rarely done as well as this. |
| Posted by Rommel Cruz on 12/05/02 at 03:37 AM your one-liners can really give me a good laugh. =) |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 12/05/02 at 06:08 AM I like the look in the other side of the mirror
with this one liner.....Fun!!!Charlie |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 12/07/02 at 04:43 AM Every time I read your philosophy I think... damn! how did he think of that??? I am with Mara Meade... you remind me of Rumi... whirling about this virtual space in your cowboy boots... You are awesome, jadi. |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 12/03/03 at 01:15 AM I had forgotten this one Jadi. Took me by surprise. Still hilarious...Charlie |
| Posted by Rula Shin on 04/14/04 at 04:55 PM Damn good stuff Jadi...damn good... |
| Posted by Wendy Geal on 06/24/04 at 02:17 PM amazing one-liner |
| Posted by Jersey D Gibson on 11/23/05 at 08:09 AM You should make some of these into bumper stickers...
yer pal
Jersey |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 04/23/06 at 04:09 AM WOWIE ZOWIE! —you are a fortune of Wonder! No wonder people are crazy about you! :D :D :D —Jill |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 01/05/07 at 02:30 PM What color is the sky in your world??? |
| Posted by Maria Massarella on 01/28/08 at 04:07 PM This oneliner of yours floated into my vision today and on closing my eyes to listen, mine became a 'sentire' (where sentire is the Italian for: to hear, listen, feel, touch) where I experience the mystery of spiraling sea-shell whirl me to groundedness while 'in contemporanea' am one with sky, wonderfilled being of light breathing light ... 'Sento' I feel, as at home in your words as I do in the universe. Maestro, your words and poetry have walked in me-with me on my path - their essence has guided me like a signpost, to the me I am ... gratitudefilled *m.a |
| Posted by Maria Massarella on 01/28/08 at 04:12 PM notes: I said 'have walked' ... and yet they 'walk' ... for they speak and fill me with the familiar, the timelessness and the new ... |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 03/01/09 at 02:56 AM This is where I need to camp out a while. Jadi's library. Jill's post sent me here from the forum. Sigh. I guess the forum is worth putting up with if it points you to treasures like this. Wonderful is by far not a good enough adjective for this short JDism. Love it! |
| Posted by Ava Blu on 03/02/09 at 09:52 PM I'm glad a link to this was in one of the forum threads. This is terrific. |
| Posted by Linda Fuller on 09/01/11 at 10:35 AM Very cool. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 09/01/11 at 03:54 PM Ah, good to read a Clay classic again. Thanks! and congrats! |
