Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Anne Engelen on 11/17/02 at 09:22 AM WOW...a special shower indeed. It surely is my favourite of yours!! Great poem Rommel! |
Posted by Quinn Vokes on 11/18/02 at 02:59 AM Ah, this is exactly how I feel after I've had a stressful day. All I want to do is take a shower so I can feel refreshed again. Wonderfully done:-) |
Posted by Christina Bruno on 11/20/02 at 02:53 PM A sensual shower as cleansing as a confession booth.. |
Posted by Matt Forget on 11/21/02 at 01:45 AM Wow...just a shower turned into a fantastic relaxation of washing the stress away. If only it were that easy, I would live in my shower! :) Fantastic job! |
Posted by John Harder on 12/05/02 at 09:49 AM wow. i really like this. i am glad i stumbled upon it. am reminded of a verse in scripture. "wash me with hyssop and i will be clean. wash me and i will be whiter than snow".. or something to that effect. i don't remember exactly. another thought provoker.. good stuff. |
Posted by Ronald A Pavellas on 12/12/02 at 01:12 AM Rommel,
This, to me, is not negative. It is quite soulful and insightful, and I enjoy reading it.
Ron |
Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 12/19/02 at 01:20 PM yes, not the usual shower....and good advice too! |
Posted by Kara Hayostek on 03/25/03 at 03:02 PM i love this poem, you can start clean and fresh everyday! |
Posted by Agnes Eva on 04/01/03 at 06:27 PM lovely cleansing process, if only one had the strength of will to repeat that to yourself every time you take a shower... |
Posted by Christina Bruno on 04/23/03 at 04:31 AM hey! congrats, where have you been :) |
Posted by Allan Haslinds on 04/23/03 at 05:38 AM very impressed. rather uplifting, and a very good choice for PotD. |
Posted by Rhodora M Fitzgerald on 04/23/03 at 11:02 AM Loved this! Very worthy of POTD! There's nothing like a great "shower" to cleanse the inside and the out! :o) |
Posted by Anne Engelen on 04/23/03 at 12:18 PM Hey buddy, congrats with the POTD! Where are you hiding nowadays anyway??? *hugs* |
Posted by Cathlyn Cartier on 04/23/03 at 02:26 PM Absolute WOW! Congratulations on POTD! |
Posted by Ashok Sharda on 04/23/03 at 02:32 PM This carries a very positive message. Positive emotions are capable of providing the necessary drive to sustain the concept of greater goodness. Where as if the charge is negative one is filled with anger, hatred, violence, envy and what not. You said this beautifully. Emotional drive needs to be properly channelized so that it doesn't turn into pure emotionalism. |
Posted by Lori Johnson on 04/23/03 at 10:47 PM Congrats, excellent choice for POTD. *wink* |
Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 07/25/03 at 03:46 AM Lather love and affection... just LOVE that line. :) |