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If Only (Romantic)

by Vimal Rony

~ LOVE ~ If I was a bird I'd nestle in your hair
and span my wings and cover you from
the cats and dogs that rains
I'd fan my wings in summer
and give away my feathers
for your quilt in winter

If i was the moon I'd shower you
with silky moonlight bathing
and play loony tunes in your mind
to transcend you to a loving bliss
I would light up your mind at night
and spark up a beautiful dream
to crown your day

Ride them we will
if all the wishes were horses
that gallop into reality
together with hugs and kisses
into a place of tranquility

But you know i am just a man
who dreams if his
horses were wishes

So take me like what i am
and drink me purely into your soul
cos after all i have a dream
with your love as the goal

11/17/2002

Posted on 11/17/2002
Copyright © 2024 Vimal Rony

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Anne Engelen on 11/17/02 at 11:33 AM

This is quite beautiful Vimal. I love the images used here. great poem!!

Posted by Christina Bruno on 11/17/02 at 05:29 PM

The imagery is wonderful, very pretty :)

Posted by Mara Meade on 11/18/02 at 05:12 PM

sigh..... "give away my feathers for your quilt in winter"...... what a selfless thought!! This is beautiful, Vimal!

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 11/19/02 at 12:53 PM

more giving thoughts were never thought, words more tender, never uttered. Beautiful words and wonderfully curious images, Vimal

Posted by Christina Bruno on 11/24/02 at 06:13 PM

OOh! You even added a scrolling marqui :)

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 12/05/02 at 05:52 PM

This is truly quite beautiful in its honest expression of affection, Vimal. What lady could resist such charm???

Posted by Kate Demeree on 06/04/03 at 12:47 PM

I love the whole poem, but *smiling* I think this is my favorite part "and play loony tunes in your mind to transcend you to a loving bliss"

Posted by Charles J Hannan on 07/05/03 at 03:33 AM

What brilliant imagery you have here Vimal!...I'm at awe with this.

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 07/07/03 at 03:28 AM

You really outdid yourself with this one Vimal. Great love fly by....Charlie

Posted by Glenn Currier on 07/07/03 at 03:36 AM

What a guy your lover has! Trailing his heart over the sky reverberating in his poems.

Posted by Sam Roberts on 08/30/03 at 01:22 AM

What a lucky girl, very beautiful xxxx

Posted by Stephanie Kent on 10/03/03 at 08:08 PM

Ride them we will if all the wishes were horses that gallop into reality together with hugs and kisses into a place of tranqility Beautiful!

Posted by Christel Crews on 05/29/06 at 05:56 PM

Congrats on POTD! Every woman wishes to be loved like this.. you have proven that it is out there and given me hope.. thank you for this beautiful read..

Posted by Christina Bruno on 05/29/06 at 07:35 PM

congrats POTD :)

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