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senryu 4

by JD Clay

 

without pesticides

mary still contrary her

garden full of weed

 

~ jadi ~

05/27/2001

Posted on 11/11/2002
Copyright © 2024 JD Clay

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 11/11/02 at 09:28 PM

LOL! Ah the two edged sword of pesticides aptly put to words, or does she or doesn't she? The proof is in the garden HAHA.

Posted by Amy Niggel on 11/13/02 at 10:31 PM

very nice gotta admit your work always leaves me with a smile!

Posted by Mara Meade on 11/14/02 at 02:44 PM

deep belly-chuckles on this one, JD...an old nursery rhyme with a twist... delightfully wicked....

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 11/15/02 at 05:35 AM

Weed and seed. Fun!!!....Charlie

Posted by Kristine Briese on 11/15/02 at 06:45 PM

I'd love a peek into your head sometime. What a mind!

Posted by Glenn Currier on 11/24/02 at 06:16 PM

Lol! yep... visited mary one too many times... good word work, jadi.

Posted by Amy Wustrin on 05/29/04 at 07:59 PM

<3 loved this!

Posted by A. Paige White on 12/07/06 at 02:44 AM

Oh yeah, this one is going in favorites. Great job! I didn't know haiku/senryu isn't supposed to be titled... Really loved this.

Posted by Alisa Js on 12/16/06 at 09:10 PM

lol.. sounds to me like this woman needs love.. lol.. the love of a good man.. that will fix her right up! and then, her garden will bloom... I wrote a poem about this kind of garden... take a look, if you dare..lol.. aloha..;-)

Posted by Gilly Wigley on 10/08/11 at 03:13 AM

Gaaaah, this one's great too!

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