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The Dawning (reposted, not new)

by Anne Howe

Do we have a sense of knowing

When this big event is due

As we journey t'wards the cervical

Joined by curly umbilical

To complete this whole birth cycle

Forging head first

Breaking through

 

I brace myself

The curtains part

On centre stage I'm found

Do I know that these are people

Who my body now surround

 

At once I'm hugged

Then turned around

And smacked upon the bum

My heel is pricked

They squeeze out blood

Do they treat me as gently as they should?

Or is this initiation

Just the dawning of my life

 

The smiling sun is dawning too

And soon begins to glow

With earthly knowledge, now I know

That somewhere between my chin and toe

Is where the pangs of hunger grow

There’s rumbling down below

 

With care my mother takes me

There is something in her smile

It’s as though we’re friends already

And she’s loved me for a while

 

I kind of push around, my face

And nuzzle until I find a place

Where sucking hard causes milk to race

To fill that hollow hungry space

That grumbles

Down below

 

Her skin is warm and tender

Soft and gentle on my face

For now the world is quieter

And not such a frightening place

 

The decision's made

The fare's been paid

It was, a one way ticket

If this is 'life'

In spite of clatter and strife

I guess I'll just 'be in it' !

11/11/2002

Posted on 11/11/2002
Copyright © 2024 Anne Howe

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by JD Clay on 11/11/02 at 06:40 AM

Wow! What a journey. An enjoyable quest indeed Anne. Peace...

Posted by Audrey M Scott on 11/11/02 at 04:26 PM

Beautifully written and a pleasure to read. Well done Anne.

Posted by David R Spellman on 11/12/02 at 08:23 PM

An excellent view from the new born child so well presented here!

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 11/15/02 at 05:31 PM

Refreshingly different...superb use of imagination and originality, Anne. Happily green with envy...wish I had written this...glad you did!! :o)

Posted by Melissa Arel on 11/23/02 at 04:34 PM

Great use of words and rhyme - Simply wonderful :)

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