Who are you by Rommel CruzWho are you? I'm afraid all I know is your name And your smile that brightens my day. But nevertheless My body yearns for your touch My mind overflows with your thoughts My eyes see only your face My lips speak only your name And my heart beats wild because of this flame. 08/20/2002 Posted on 08/20/2002 Copyright © 2025 Rommel Cruz
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Britt Zimmerman on 01/24/03 at 08:57 AM I feel this poem so much...pulsing through every inch of my body, beautifully written and exceptionally vivid and angst ridden...love it! |
Posted by Melissa Arel on 04/25/03 at 05:48 PM Tempting and lovely.. great read. :) |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/13/03 at 03:23 AM Excellent opening to a poem......and relationship! ;o) |
Posted by Lori I Wolfe on 07/27/03 at 03:29 PM simple and sweet ... so very beautiful! |
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