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by Rommel Cruz

Who are you?
I'm afraid all I know is your name
And your smile that brightens my day.
But nevertheless
My body yearns for your touch
My mind overflows with your thoughts
My eyes see only your face
My lips speak only your name
And my heart beats wild because of this flame.

08/20/2002

Posted on 08/20/2002
Copyright © 2025 Rommel Cruz

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Britt Zimmerman on 01/24/03 at 08:57 AM

I feel this poem so much...pulsing through every inch of my body, beautifully written and exceptionally vivid and angst ridden...love it!

Posted by Melissa Arel on 04/25/03 at 05:48 PM

Tempting and lovely.. great read. :)

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/13/03 at 03:23 AM

Excellent opening to a poem......and relationship! ;o)

Posted by Lori I Wolfe on 07/27/03 at 03:29 PM

simple and sweet ... so very beautiful!

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