| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by William Teo on 01/16/03 at 02:28 PM I really like the style of ur poetry and belief :) |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/09/03 at 02:54 PM Truly beautiful and romantic Ashok. I enjoyed reading this very much. |
| Posted by Agnes Eva on 05/21/03 at 09:59 PM the world of joy beauty love, so full of all the unsaid, subconscious, magical things that resonate and give it life and feed the soul. you are simply in tune with them, you know how to stop time to dwell in them. i'm sorry she didn't realize this and ended the journey prematurely. you captured the beauty that it was. |
| Posted by Alex Smyth on 06/14/03 at 07:28 PM An experience of the heart, mind and soul. Beautifully, truthfully, and humanly expressed. Both parties were fortunate to have shared in this. |
| Posted by Rachelle Howe on 09/07/03 at 11:04 PM this is gorgeous. sometimes even human love astounds and shakes me. she's lucky, if she knows, and i'm sure she does... especially with words like these. amazing. |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 09/19/03 at 01:18 PM this is absolutely brilliant... i knew when i read your foreword and my chest tightened, i was in for a heart appealing beauty of a poem... you did not let us down... perfect and flowing and precious and simply all encompassing of your love... this is how it should be and you have captured it excellently in written words... awesome... blessings |
| Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 10/03/03 at 04:51 PM Beautiful... "Filled she was
with the melodic ecstasy
without hearing
" beautiful, beautiful, beautiful |
| Posted by Maureen Glaude on 12/11/03 at 12:36 AM I know exactly what you mean, and when that mesh occurs, so that he could be she and vice versa, they are each other, equal, it is true reciprocated magic I believe. Incredible. An honour to have read |
| Posted by Rula Shin on 01/21/04 at 05:29 PM The only poem you wrote about love and it's about the one who got away...so sorry Ashok, but very beautiful flowing, and because of the author's note, hearbreaking work. *She walked
into my dream without walking* Gorgeous! What vivid memories you have of that rare and precious chemistry you shared...I wonder if you would have remembered this as passionately had she NOT gotten away :-)
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| Posted by Marjorie Anne Reagan on 02/01/04 at 02:59 PM The most special kind of love is indescribable.
You describe it so well here:-) |
| Posted by Wendy Geal on 03/07/04 at 01:30 AM I'd quote my favorite part... but then i'd end up quoting the whole thing. this is amazing. |
| Posted by Maria Terezia Ferencz on 04/05/05 at 04:07 PM Pure Rapture.... |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 04/06/05 at 03:11 AM This I couldn't read without reading a fine love story Ashok. Well done Charlie |
| Posted by Laura Doom on 04/06/05 at 04:37 PM Precious - and amazing, in style & substance, and also in the way you retained all your comments with the repost - or was it? |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 04/08/05 at 11:52 AM What more could anyone ask for? When it happens unsaid, that's great, but even more so when it's said too. I don't see any demons here, but maybe chimes of love could be chimes of attraction instead as you list love afterwards with joy and beauty. Just a suggestion. :o) |
| Posted by Junemarie Roldan on 05/24/08 at 05:52 PM If anything could be perfect, this would be it. |
| Posted by Allison Smith on 07/16/09 at 08:32 AM Very nice indeed. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 05/04/15 at 03:30 AM Always loved this one. Good to see it as POTD! |
