| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 04/11/08 at 09:54 PM Beautiful! Surely such beauty causes flack out of sheer jealousy. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 04/12/08 at 12:44 AM Can't be kept down, Love, thank Heaven. Thank you for this growing place. |
| Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 04/12/08 at 07:55 AM Beautiful relief, I will take this "crack" this "avenue" over all else. The elegance, the sure beauty of the poem mirrors the "ever blooming" beauty it describes. |
| Posted by Mike Loftis on 04/12/08 at 01:52 PM One one of the best reads I've seen in a good while. Love the final stanza the most. |
| Posted by Laurie Blum on 04/13/08 at 10:04 PM This is lovely. I enjoyed the pace and rhyming so much I read it several times. |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 04/14/08 at 02:29 PM The resilience of love - you've captured that so amazingly here. Beautiful! |
| Posted by Jean Mollett on 04/15/08 at 03:44 AM Hi Elizabeth,
It's lovely. Strange how weeds can grow anywhere. |
| Posted by Jean Mollett on 04/15/08 at 03:44 AM Yes, indeed. Love keeps going. :)
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| Posted by Laura Doom on 04/15/08 at 02:22 PM I've been getting into cadence recently, so this gravid allegorical infloresence of yours was music to my ears, despite the irreversible demise of my cognitive functions :> |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 04/15/08 at 04:46 PM I love the simplicity of this poem as well as its message. Beautifully done! |
| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 04/16/08 at 12:32 PM Ah what sweet metaphor and beautiful feeling...I am, there is no other word for it, enchanted! |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 04/17/08 at 09:23 PM ...eliza, my love, i was signing off and saw you at el numero uno annnnnnd i'd not read it and everybody in the western hemisphere had, buuuut not me, your number one admirer and i love this one so Jesusy and yet stayed away by sheer creativity, one more reason to keep loving and adoring you...charlie |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 04/19/08 at 07:27 PM Had to come back for another read - this one really struck a chord with me. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 04/22/08 at 06:11 PM Colourful reminder of how nature eventually takes back what is hers. |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 04/24/08 at 02:44 PM This one brought me a Jillion smiles...Charmin |
| Posted by Eli Skipp on 05/01/08 at 01:37 PM What a gorgeous take on an old concept! It takes true brilliance to bring a new light on this, this line is wonderful ""Destroy! Its revelry intrudes the skein!" That goes in my beautiful-quote database. |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 02/24/09 at 02:37 PM Weeds will grow anywhere- despite any obstacle. They are persitant and don't care what's in their way. GREAT write (as always~!) |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 07/16/10 at 06:54 PM the sort of dance taking place in this would make Nureyev envy as it leaps and spins and then lands and markedly is my heart altered a beat. |
