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Reverse Criticism
by Chris Sorrenti
There’s a disturbing undercurrent of aimless thought and
unproductive idealism in Sorrenti’s poetry,
despite the careful glossing over he gives his subjects.
Each book is an all-out balancing act between good and evil,
with plenty of inexperience and naivete mixed in,
as he tries to pass himself off as a Frost or Whitman.
Having thrown all sense of rhyme and rhythm out the window,
this renegade has wasted the better part of a lifetime,
courting the English language with uncouth advances and proposals.
© 1983
Inputted and revised © 2022
230 hits as of August 2024
09/26/2022 Author's Note: Early experimentation with self-deprecation.
Posted on 09/26/2022
Copyright © 2024 Chris Sorrenti
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 09/26/22 at 08:38 PM I loved this, Not parcial to whitman or Frost- I prefer Yeats, Milay, etc good read |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 10/02/22 at 01:00 AM I enjoyed this self critique (by another you LOL). Loved that last line especially. Good tongue in cheek in this one, also. Thanks! |
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