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10ryu
by Laura Doomin demographic process
natural selection breeds
one nation eugenicism
the great undressed
no longer just
beneath the surface 12/29/2019 Author's Note: my restless state
Posted on 12/29/2019
Copyright © 2024 Laura Doom
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 12/29/19 at 11:19 PM It does feel like the "great undressings" of our time to me, by so many, revealing that which makes me want to hide. Well, perhaps it is good to know what is underneath? |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 12/31/19 at 02:36 AM I think of social media and how people undress. I would rather they stay clothed and modest. Perhaps something will happen and these unnatural acts will be selected and discarded. Not sure this approaches anything you intended at all, but it is my reaction. Thanks for thought provoking piece, Laura. |
| Posted by Brian Francis on 01/07/20 at 04:52 PM I can be scary what the mirror reveals ain't? Nice writting with a punch. |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 02/17/21 at 08:09 PM Great piece- Great POTD! |
| Posted by Stephan Anstey on 02/25/21 at 07:39 PM Dont' mind me, i was just passing through and this is lovely. |
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