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syrenu

by Laura Doom

erotic displacement
not vile but evil
unveiled live

03/09/2019

Author's Note: [definitely not] articles with little weight

Posted on 03/09/2019
Copyright © 2019 Laura Doom

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Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 03/10/19 at 04:42 PM

Articles of little weight which bear no resemblances to your words would never displace anything in realms where elements are waiting their displacement, your’s ( words )are genuinely heavy duty and will never fail to move, sway freight of thoughts elsewhere from where they are tending to stagnate. Displacement keeps poetic sense flowing and alively present.

Posted by Glenn Currier on 03/16/19 at 03:24 PM

For me, your syrenu packs a swift but powerful punch to awaken me. evil/vile - sheer genius placement and confirmation of what is possible with our language and with a creative mind. Thanks Laura. What a gift you and your poem are!

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