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Atomic love
by Patricia J ReedLove is not human
Our souls are put together
With bits of
Shattered matter
Atoms of stars
The dust
Of a long gone planet
You are yourself
An entire universe
Love is the joining of atoms
Exhilarated by their
Awareness and approximation
Of seeing each other again 03/21/2018 Posted on 03/21/2018
Copyright © 2023 Patricia J Reed
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 03/22/18 at 11:40 AM I think this poem works just the way you have presented it here and says what it has to say although I understand that one can shape it more to one's liking or have the poem say more or less what it is saying now but in a slightly different way. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 03/30/18 at 08:27 PM "you are yourself
and entire universe" loved these lines. That first line makes me question all kinds of ideas about what is human and our place in the cosmos. |
| Posted by Matthew Sharp on 12/11/18 at 08:40 PM beautiful perspective the universe is amazing and so are you:) |
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