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by Patricia J Reed

love is not human
our souls are put together
with bits of
shattered matter
atoms of stars
the dust
of a long gone planet

you are yourself
and entire universe

love is the joining of atoms
exhilarated by their
awarness and approximation
of seeing each other again

03/21/2018

Author's Note: still working on this one, i have no title yet, and am thinking about taking out the middle part to do a completely separate poem, it just hasn't come to me yet

Posted on 03/21/2018
Copyright © 2021 Patricia J Reed

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 03/22/18 at 11:40 AM

I think this poem works just the way you have presented it here and says what it has to say although I understand that one can shape it more to one's liking or have the poem say more or less what it is saying now but in a slightly different way.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 03/30/18 at 08:27 PM

"you are yourself and entire universe" loved these lines. That first line makes me question all kinds of ideas about what is human and our place in the cosmos.

Posted by Matthew Sharp on 12/11/18 at 08:40 PM

beautiful perspective the universe is amazing and so are you:)

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