Posted by Glenn Currier on 12/10/17 at 01:56 PM Chris, you had me hooked all the way through. Forgetting the title momentarily, you had my imagination reeling, holding me in the air of your spacious poem. And upon re-reading it I see myself in the lines, especially the part about "taking theirs much too seriously." The way you wrote this in couplets invites a freedom in the reading, a certain lightness, which, I think, matches your intent. Thanks Chris. |