|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 12/04/17 at 04:27 PM|
I do believe you get better and better.
|Posted by Brian Francis on 12/04/17 at 06:47 PM|
Your flow and diction are quite impressive in this piece. Great write --bf
|Posted by Rob Littler on 12/05/17 at 04:20 AM|
...the more I read it the more the character's voice changes for me in my head...first pass had me hearing self-deprecation in the first parts and "we" became a critique of a relationship... then I saw a societal/political commentary and the flesh as the escape...all this on top of the fact that I like to read it out loud. Plus, you made me log in to write this glorification.
|Posted by George Hoerner on 12/05/17 at 10:12 PM|
This really struck a cord in my in mind or what is left of it. Nicely done.
|Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 12/17/17 at 02:08 PM|
Really like the juxtaposition of words, images, and meanings here. Quite original Johnny.
|Posted by Olivia Weinkein on 02/14/18 at 03:11 AM|
from a noose to a rope... I just love this. All of it.
|Posted by Dawn Davidson on 03/14/18 at 04:34 PM|
lovely contrast of beauty and raw, really shows what a great poet you are