After Carlos Williams

by Paganini Jones

the wheelbarrow
might have been red

I know
in the wind
it creaks

roost elsewhere


Posted on 10/13/2017
Copyright © 2020 Paganini Jones

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 10/14/17 at 09:03 AM

Cool poem, sparse but with impact. Definitely see the Carlos Williams influence.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 10/18/17 at 04:06 PM

I've enjoyed coming back to this one. It's a fun take on Williams' piece with that great last stanza of chickens being elsewhere.

Posted by Rob Littler on 10/21/17 at 09:26 AM

not just
are the
well glazed

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