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After Carlos Williams
by Paganini Jones
the wheelbarrow
might have been red
I know
in the wind
it creaks
chickens
roost elsewhere
10/13/2017 Posted on 10/13/2017
Copyright © 2025 Paganini Jones
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 10/14/17 at 09:03 AM Cool poem, sparse but with impact. Definitely see the Carlos Williams influence. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 10/18/17 at 04:06 PM I've enjoyed coming back to this one. It's a fun take on Williams' piece with that great last stanza of chickens being elsewhere. |
| Posted by Rob Littler on 10/21/17 at 09:26 AM not just
are the
doughnuts
well glazed
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