Discipline (old school revision)

by Laura Doom

[if I'm repeating myself]


Posted on 09/17/2017
Copyright © 2020 Laura Doom

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 09/17/17 at 03:59 PM

Brilliant combination of writers' mantra and technology.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 09/18/17 at 02:13 AM

Ha! You have moved beyond into a visually clever level of word manipulation. In a world of pushing buttons, I was more than happy to oblige. A poet's mantra, in truth. Sorry, out of time, I must go see what happens when I push it again. ;)

Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 09/20/17 at 03:44 PM

Brilliant. And I let it go for quite a few lines so that maybe it would stick in my own head. Very unique and relatable piece. qg

Posted by Brian Francis on 09/22/17 at 03:30 AM

I was determined to allow you to suffer one hundred repetitions but patience got the better of me. Now for the teachers follow through line " I hope you've learn your lesson" so I guess we can expect a steady flow of creation from you. Any way cleaver is the word. peace --bf

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