Float Back Down by V. Blakethe flowers
are armor
for a gray
that has teeth;
a veil between
sorrows
and shadows
beneath.
the sun can stop
shining--
it won't matter
to me:
i am nothing
but weightless,
alone and
complete. 07/20/2017 Posted on 07/20/2017 Copyright © 2024 V. Blake
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 07/29/17 at 09:55 AM Great opening line and a fine ending. |
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 08/02/17 at 01:32 AM Pretty fine images here and I liked that I did not know where this was going. Not many admit to being alone and feeling complete. Thanks for this. |
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