| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 04/06/17 at 11:04 PM Absolutely love this piece! Loved "hormones of colorful language", "feathered and tarred with invisible ink",especially "looking through the glass
of a planet sized aquarium", and that killer ending. Thanks! |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 04/08/17 at 01:28 AM I suspect we all have similar feelings from time to time. I have stopped in the middle of writing something and say to myself as I throw the pen on the floor "you're such an a hole" and I'll stop writing for a week or a month. Then I forget what I am and start again.... until I remember. One day I'll just pull the plug or run into a tree. Take care... peace
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| Posted by Rob Littler on 04/08/17 at 05:43 PM most fishermen scare the fish away, but you are the reef, and they run from the waves |
| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 04/09/17 at 04:30 PM not gibberish at all, but a delightful soup to sip on a calm and warming Sunday. |
