| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 04/04/17 at 02:47 PM This is just jam packed with what I read and view each day in this insane post election interminable era (dare I say apoplectic scene). I feel slam, I hear rap. I really love the flow of S2 and especially "fifty shades of grime." |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 04/05/17 at 12:14 AM Catchy word combos and twists of familiar as in the title identify this as another kill for a poetic ace and worthy addition to her/your repertoire. |
| Posted by Tim D Livingston on 04/06/17 at 12:16 AM This is pretty tight. I like the rhyme scheme and how it hits on cultural notes. |
| Posted by Rob Littler on 04/06/17 at 04:46 AM To love or hate the haters
deals a triumph to the gladiators
and quietly all the houses are gone but the huffandpuff goes on! |
| Posted by Rob Littler on 04/06/17 at 04:48 AM "Sadly, you've been chopped, Gladiator Barry." |
| Posted by Brian Francis on 04/11/17 at 03:48 PM I love the flow your choice of words allow. This is a wonderful write! Thanx -- peace --bf
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| Posted by LK Barrett on 06/15/17 at 08:50 AM Your flow is so tight...my heart is beat boxin' for my lips every time I read it. Thank you for the right write. Right? LK |
