by Laura Doom

just ice
without a break

a butterfly
flaps its wings
under water

taking liberties
with freedom


Posted on 02/18/2017
Copyright © 2020 Laura Doom

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Paul Lastovica on 02/18/17 at 02:08 AM

been too long since I've seen your name emblazoned across the newly posted log. Got me going at Justice Just Ice, and the second threesome gave the appropriate chill alluded to in the first - and the third brought it all close to home.

Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 02/18/17 at 05:34 PM


Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/18/17 at 10:40 PM

I like how all three stanzas are different from one another and relate in their own way to the title.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/18/17 at 11:55 PM

S1 is my favorite - love the visual effect of that. Still wringing my hands here, but it's helpful to know others can relate.

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