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let me count your freckles like stars

by Melissa Arel


let me count your freckles like stars
oh the constellations i could discover
if i were to explore your body like a traveller
drawing on your skin with my finger
swirling galaxies with my tongue

07/10/2016

Author's Note: TSW

Posted on 07/30/2016
Copyright © 2024 Melissa Arel

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 07/30/16 at 04:18 PM

Excellent!

Posted by Tom Goss on 07/30/16 at 10:30 PM

I acquiesce.

Posted by Richard Vince on 07/31/16 at 05:32 PM

beautiful. :) very evocative. :)

Posted by Paul Lastovica on 08/02/16 at 01:21 AM

I have no freckles :( So good to read you again, though! :)

Posted by Ken Harnisch on 08/22/16 at 07:58 PM

Good to see your creative juices have not only been revived, they've been exploded like skyrockets!

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